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Ambivalent
Contributed by
Luinil
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When blackest morning
Swallows brightest night,
Silence screams
Crafting destructive fight
A lonely company
Tells fabled truths
A lifeless heart beats
In an aged youth
Dulled serration
Fuses bleeding sores
Proudly ashamed
Fighting tranquil wars
Perpetually limited
Breathless, I live
Achingly numb,
Liberated captive
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-23 21:10:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ambivalent
(User Rating: 1 ) by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:08:40 PM AEST (User
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Ohhhhh - very creative. I absolutely love some of the words you tied together --- silence screams.... proudly ashamed... achingly numb.
I enjoyed this! Very well done!
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Re: Ambivalent
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:41:06 PM AEST (User
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ahhh, this is beautiful, love how you wrote this, excellent and thought provoking:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Ambivalent
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:49:45 AM AEST (User
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i love your work,..... you are such a talented writer
pixie xx |
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