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Array ( [sid] => 53386 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death's Row [time] => 2004-06-23 16:41:18 [hometext] => ehh i dunno what ta say bout this poem...comment if ya want...thankz [bodytext] => some one wake me
stir my soul
break me from this eternity

from this plastic life
so fake
as i bleed

apon the soft bed sheets
seeping into death row
calling for some one

some one to know
that as a day gose by
another gives way unknown

insanity simmers behind my eyelids
asi give it all away
into an eternity of sleep

cutting apart my wrists
and resisting life
bleeding into the white

comiting this long held suicide prayer
smile as i black out
my last breath i breath

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Death's Row

Contributed by TwEeK on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:41:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

some one wake me
stir my soul
break me from this eternity

from this plastic life
so fake
as i bleed

apon the soft bed sheets
seeping into death row
calling for some one

some one to know
that as a day gose by
another gives way unknown

insanity simmers behind my eyelids
asi give it all away
into an eternity of sleep

cutting apart my wrists
and resisting life
bleeding into the white

comiting this long held suicide prayer
smile as i black out
my last breath i breath

slipping fast into death's row

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-06-23 16:41:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death's Row (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:46:29 PM AEST
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that's very good, shows a lot of emotion

Please comment on my work
Summer

Re: Death's Row (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_f006 on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:54:45 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. It was good, very clear. read mine....
xo Jill

Re: Death's Row (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:00:20 PM AEST
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:(

I'm sorry...I have a lot of problems with people being suicidal...especially since most of my friends have/had been at one point...including me.

touching poem

ACY

Re: Death's Row (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:19:14 PM AEST
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Great poem, though I have to say that I truly hope you hit the "safety net" before you hit death's row...

Jaime

Re: Death's Row (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:08:08 AM AEST
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very impressive write

pixie xx

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