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Array ( [sid] => 53377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Im Sorry Mom [time] => 2004-06-23 16:07:12 [hometext] => PLEASE COMMENT [bodytext] => The hateful words
the sheded tears
the lonely nights
make up these past few years

mom im sorry
what am i to do?
what am i supposed to say
when u hate me the way you do

so you hate me now?
is that what it is?
you want to send me away?
am i what your problem is?

im sorry
so now i lock myself in my room for days
as i pack my bags
these 4 walls around me become one big haze

im ready to go
next morning not a word is said
i eat my last breakfast with you
and i go upstairs to make my bed

well my flight is boarding
i hear my row being called
i turn from you so you wont see me ball

i slowly walk away with tears in my eyes
you seem fine
for one last look i turn around
only to see that youre no where to be found [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Laurel126 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Im Sorry Mom

Contributed by Laurel126 on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:07:12 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The hateful words
the sheded tears
the lonely nights
make up these past few years

mom im sorry
what am i to do?
what am i supposed to say
when u hate me the way you do

so you hate me now?
is that what it is?
you want to send me away?
am i what your problem is?

im sorry
so now i lock myself in my room for days
as i pack my bags
these 4 walls around me become one big haze

im ready to go
next morning not a word is said
i eat my last breakfast with you
and i go upstairs to make my bed

well my flight is boarding
i hear my row being called
i turn from you so you wont see me ball

i slowly walk away with tears in my eyes
you seem fine
for one last look i turn around
only to see that youre no where to be found

Copyright © Laurel126 ... [ 2004-06-23 16:07:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Im Sorry Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:10:58 PM AEST
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Okay

Re: Im Sorry Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:11:01 PM AEST
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Been there, just stay in touch with mom.

Re: Im Sorry Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:26:45 PM AEST
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This could have been myself five years ago... boarding a flight to my dad's house, a man I never knew.... kicked out... by my idol...

It's a sad story... and if you ever need to talk... I know where you are... and... don't let the pain scar you, one thing I never believed was that people cared about me... don't make the same mistake... please...

*J*

Re: Im Sorry Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:12:00 PM AEST
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Wow, my heart feels for you . I could feel your anger, lone one ness . Its a big world out there venture with care.

Whisper

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