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To a Friend
Contributed by
ceruleanafterglo
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:06:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Don't give it up so easily
Some people were born to lie
Anyone can say that you're pretty
But tell me, are they looking on the inside?
Play your games, do what you do
When you're bored you need some touch
From anyone, who knows who cares
Even when it's over it's not enough
Who can swim in an ocean that is far too shallow?
Who can love the inside when you're only offering the outside?
Tell me, little girl,
Are you happy?
Or is it all a cover up when you've got no place to turn?
It's fun for the moment, but they'll never respect you
Maybe one day you'll learn
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ceruleanafterglo
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2004-06-23 16:06:42]
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Re: To a Friend
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:09:20 PM AEST
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| So true, well done. |
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Re: To a Friend
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:28:33 PM AEST
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| It's unfortunate that most young girls in our society act like this... but this is well said, great write... |
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Re: To a Friend
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:43:57 PM AEST
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Great write and very true
please comment on my work too
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