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Just A Game
Contributed by
Laurel126
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:05:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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As the sun sets
So does my heart
Shattered by the words you say
Broken from the start
Learning to love you
To look past mistakes
Doing stupid things for you
My soul, I've misplaced
Under your spell
Of making me stay
Trying to listen to my heart
But it hasnt much to say
I don't know who I am
This girl I have become
Thinking life is one big game
But it really hasn't even begun
Copyright ©
Laurel126
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2004-06-23 16:05:16]
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Re: Just A Game
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:08:12 PM AEST
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| Well done, it has only begun. Be strong. |
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Re: Just A Game
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:29:51 PM AEST
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Ahh, but life is a game... a game of strategy and warfare on our very souls....
well written and a great write... I like this
Jaime |
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Re: Just A Game
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:13:50 AM AEST
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great write,
pixie xx |
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