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Ramblings of a Broken Heart
Contributed by
xtreme_emotions
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:42:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Running on no sleep...
How could I sleep after losing you?
I see you when I close my eyes,
Remember everything from the last two weeks--
I refuse to let myself cry.
I drive myself insane with questions...
Would you still have wanted her when you met if we'd been together?
I guess it doesn't matter anymore
Since she has your heart in her hand--
You have mine under your boot.
Remembering our talk last fall on your front porch...
I couldn't hide the tears even though I tried.
I wanted to walk out of your life for good,
But you wouldn't let me leave you like that--
We managed to work it out then.
You know how much I love you...
With our history, you'd be blind not to know.
You see through my smile to the broken heart,
Through the understanding to my bitter tears--
She burned all our bridges for us.
The war was over before it began...
She wanted you regardless of the cost.
I wouldn't fight a battle I knew I'd lose,
So she had no problems reclaiming you--
The price ended up being our friendship and my happiness.
My heart can't take the pain anymore...
Even if I found another, how could I open my heart again?
I wish I could turn my emotions into ice,
Drop the cold part of your heart that you left me with--
But I lie here feeling it all...your emotional punching bag.
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Re: Ramblings of a Broken Heart
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:39:46 PM AEST
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very sorry for your loss you sound pretty heartbroken...well I liked this one a lot keep it up keep it coming...keep your head held high...
read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: Ramblings of a Broken Heart
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:47:29 PM AEST
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good grief how friggin sad... twas a very good poem... I hope it helped to alleviate the sadness you are feeling. Hang in there.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Ramblings of a Broken Heart
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:14:51 AM AEST
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i really feel for you , your heatache speaks volumes in your words *hugs you tightly*
pixie xx |
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