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[aid] => mick
[title] => dew on a flower
[time] => 2004-06-23 14:24:34
[hometext] => hmm...
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you know all there is about me
and still its me you want to see,
its only natural that we feel like this
we know all there is about each other
we're like watery dew on a flower,
its only natural to be with you and
be happy with your hugs and smile; funny
we have known each other all this while,
so its only natural that even my darkest
days; have never scared you away
and you accept me whatever i may say,
conversation about anything brought
to mind; i know i can trust you, you've
a heart that is genuinely kind,
so its only natural for hearts to unfurl
and yeah, you are pretty special to me
too, but don't say im your girl,
i think i will still let you in; even though
i believe on your head you have fallen!
theres so many fish in the sea
why me!?
§* *§
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[ratings] => 16
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => LovePoetry
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dew on a flower
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:24:34 PM in AEST
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you know all there is about me
and still its me you want to see,
its only natural that we feel like this
we know all there is about each other
we're like watery dew on a flower,
its only natural to be with you and
be happy with your hugs and smile; funny
we have known each other all this while,
so its only natural that even my darkest
days; have never scared you away
and you accept me whatever i may say,
conversation about anything brought
to mind; i know i can trust you, you've
a heart that is genuinely kind,
so its only natural for hearts to unfurl
and yeah, you are pretty special to me
too, but don't say im your girl,
i think i will still let you in; even though
i believe on your head you have fallen!
theres so many fish in the sea
why me!?
§* *§
*|*
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Yodo on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:38:27 PM AEST
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| Awwwww |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:39:33 PM AEST
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*smiles*
I love this one, Nessa . . . so perfectly expressed. And, as for the last stanza, it's hard to think of anyone MORE deserving of this than you :). *hugs*
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by SnowB on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:51:29 PM AEST
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This certainly sounds like an unconditional love...an honest and pure love..beautifully composed...
Lena |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:41:00 PM AEST
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Oh dear! I know what this sounds like to me. :::::::fretfretfret::::::: Ok maybe the dogs aren't the BEST bedfellows! lol Just jump in and enjoy the moment of his.. dew ..on your....petals??? :-) :P :P lil lol??? ;-)
Angel...almooooooost always.... teeheehee
p.s. Woohoo, I'm not the umpteenth to comment! Now *I* am happy! :-D |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:55:55 PM AEST
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These words are so pretty. I don't know how you did it.
And don't worry, good things come to those who wait... you never know it's good til it's gone--except this time... you seem to have realized it's good B4 it's gone.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:59:23 PM AEST
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Nessa, how absolutely wonderful. And just why wouldn't he want to be with one of the most beautiful and caring people I know? You can tell from that he has excellent taste! Take a chance, ladyfawn, take a chance. What do you have to lose but maybe some caring loving moments?
Love,
Rita |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:38:05 PM AEST
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I really curious as to who he is, nessmom, because he's stolen you clean away from the woman you used to be... not that I'm complaining, I like it...
It's a beautiful poem, and as for the last line, I too can't think of a more deserving woman than you... alright, I'm a little biased...
xoxo Jaime |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:55:18 PM AEST
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| lucky lady... beautiful writing!* |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:07:48 PM AEST
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sometimes friendship turns into the best kind of love
Shari |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:34:26 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa have you been bitten by a love bug??
Michelle |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:14:13 PM AEST
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Lovely write.Nice pic too :-)
Whisper |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:36:51 PM AEST
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I'm going to go with Rita and tell you to take a chance.
This brought a smile to my face. :))) |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by arden on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:05:39 PM AEST
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awww this was very sweet and cute nessa.
beautifully done. twas a joy to read.
enjoyed it.
Arden |
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:47:15 PM AEST
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oh Nessa this is so sweet - I am so happy for you - enjoy every moment of it -
Big Hugs Sis
Merry |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:19:05 PM AEST
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| What wonderful love you describe so well - although I have to think that you are too self deprecating at the end - a wonderful person, and wonderful write. |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by venkat on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:32:01 AM AEST
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| Totally heart warming..Aah..very sweet, very beautiful..hugs and love my dear friend..:-) venkat |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:15:52 AM AEST
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wow, your poems are always so perfect :)
pixie xx |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:40:23 PM AEST
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Divine simply divine Lady
Love Sweetangelukxxxx
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:51:58 PM AEST
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nessa...why not? :)
Nicely done. |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:20:00 PM AEST
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Awwww..such a perfect picture you have painted here with your words of love.... and I'll join in and say...there is no one more deserving, my friend....
Jenni |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 03:40:51 PM AEST
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| very sweet! what a wonderful way for love to blossom... from a close friendship |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:07:03 PM AEST
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Why you you ask? Silly woman, he chose you because you are the person you are. :o)
So beautiful ness
Roses
Larry |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Gentledove on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:04:11 PM AEST
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A beautiful write.
Gentledove |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:01:07 PM AEST
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Very Nice comparison "we're like watery dew on a flower, Great lines..
Creat poem
Cheers Robert |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:35:38 AM AEST
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Ah Nessa this is lovely sweet adoring write. It proves that love means devotion no matter what the cirumstances, how beautifully portrayed. I loved the added touch with the picture insertion, brings a little more life to the poem. Very nice work indeed.
Your fan
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Re: dew on a flower
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 07:53:30 PM AEST
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| Awww Nessa, truly a work of art. Beautifully done my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by colinb on
Thursday, 31st July 2014 @ 04:26:06 PM AEST
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| beautifully |
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Re: dew on a flower
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 17th February 2015 @ 08:36:14 AM AEST
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This warms my heart! Beauty.
~Scorp |
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