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Wander Around
Contributed by
AngelousBlack
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:04:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I walk around in the night
Passing on by to see a fight
I walk and walk,
All alone in the night
With nowhere to go
That seems to be in sight
I stop by a pub
And sit down and watch
Everybody drinking and singing
I ask for a Bloody Mary
And drink it all up
I walk on out,
It darkens some more and the
Fright begins to come
I stop and do nothing more
And just watch the darkness
Go on by and by
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AngelousBlack
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2004-06-23 13:04:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Wander Around
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:22:32 PM AEST (User
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Nicely done. We all seem to wander like this. Your words ring true in the minds of many.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Wander Around
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:36:34 PM AEST (User
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Interesting write - :-) might I suggest to re a arrange a few lines a bit .
Whisper
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Re: Wander Around
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:34:16 PM AEST (User
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good write. |
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Re: Wander Around
(User Rating: 1 ) by mindset on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:56:51 PM AEST (User
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yeah |
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