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Array ( [sid] => 53322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mighty Hybrid Theory [time] => 2004-06-23 09:11:55 [hometext] => This is one of my band's more weirder songs. Me, Damein, and Justin wrote these lyrics...so I can't take full credit. Well...here... *=Damein's lyrics, **=my lyrics, ***=Justin's [bodytext] => [Damien]

I was riding around in old Mexico*
I shot some guy in the toe*

[Bones]

Locked in my cage**
Trying to keep in my rage**

Darkness falls across the land of Micheal Jackson***
crawls, the werewolf howl scares the children***

[Damein]

It was a cool night*
I froze my balls off*

[Bones]

My body frozen, like a solid bullet**
Ihate it when you leave me behind**

The vampires hunt for blood as the light***
of a cross blinds the evil dudes***

[Damein]

Across the street I see*
WAIT...I gotta pee*

[Bones]

My mind has become inexorable**
I have no motavation to live**

Nature basks in all it's glory as the evil***
is put away. Never again to see the light of day...*** [comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Mighty Hybrid Theory

Contributed by Bones on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:11:55 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

[Damien]

I was riding around in old Mexico*
I shot some guy in the toe*

[Bones]

Locked in my cage**
Trying to keep in my rage**

Darkness falls across the land of Micheal Jackson***
crawls, the werewolf howl scares the children***

[Damein]

It was a cool night*
I froze my balls off*

[Bones]

My body frozen, like a solid bullet**
Ihate it when you leave me behind**

The vampires hunt for blood as the light***
of a cross blinds the evil dudes***

[Damein]

Across the street I see*
WAIT...I gotta pee*

[Bones]

My mind has become inexorable**
I have no motavation to live**

Nature basks in all it's glory as the evil***
is put away. Never again to see the light of day...***

Copyright © Bones ... [ 2004-06-23 09:11:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Mighty Hybrid Theory (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:30:42 AM AEST
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mmm, that is weird!
i do like it though. good rhyming!

Re: Mighty Hybrid Theory (User Rating: 1 )
by Kusko on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:37:14 AM AEST
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I don't like it
try getting deeper into imagery and having more of one conscious objective.
it's almost like it's trying hard to be wierd.
Not a good feeling.
Plus using the word "balls" kind of ruins a song for me. Sorry, just not appetizing.
Look at Nine Inch Nails or something.
I love thier lyrics.

Re: Mighty Hybrid Theory (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:58:50 AM AEST
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heh, very weird... but ya gotta have some of that every now and then... makes life interesting...

I agree, "balls" is unappealing in this context... but it wasn't a part that you wrote so
keeping that in mind, this is alright. :)

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