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Array ( [sid] => 53304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lover's Dance [time] => 2004-06-23 05:22:17 [hometext] => This is dedicated to two people on this site. I never got to tell you how happy I am for the both of you. You both deserve the happiness and the dance... *slow music starts playing* Have your turn on the floor... [bodytext] => Two souls partaking in a chance
They find each other in a dance
Under moonlight beams and the fires glow
Showing love; movement of bodies slow.

He steps forward and she follows lead
They sway together in the moment of need
Under glittered stars and night
Sharing hope; love, life and light.

Tender circles through the park
Dancing their way from light to dark
In this sweet lovers embrace
Happiness is in reach; no longer to chase.

And through the clouds of golden seams
On all the gleaming starlight beams
Nurturing all the softened skin
A lover's dance; where both hearts win. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => strange_lindsey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 26 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Lover's Dance

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:22:17 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Two souls partaking in a chance
They find each other in a dance
Under moonlight beams and the fires glow
Showing love; movement of bodies slow.

He steps forward and she follows lead
They sway together in the moment of need
Under glittered stars and night
Sharing hope; love, life and light.

Tender circles through the park
Dancing their way from light to dark
In this sweet lovers embrace
Happiness is in reach; no longer to chase.

And through the clouds of golden seams
On all the gleaming starlight beams
Nurturing all the softened skin
A lover's dance; where both hearts win.

Copyright © strange_lindsey ... [ 2004-06-23 05:22:17]
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Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:23:22 AM AEST
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That was truly stunning....very very beautiful play of words and imagery...whoever this is dedicated to must be really happy people.

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:59:51 AM AEST
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A wonderful dedication.

They (whomever they are) should feel proud to have such notable poems written about them.

Many thanks for writing, Lindsey, well done!

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:06:42 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write, the moment is very well portrayed making it almost impossible for the reader not to visualise, lovely job. Enjoyable read.
Corinna

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:29:50 AM AEST
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awwwww this was so lovely. who ever they are will be very pleased when they read this :)

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:26:59 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful... :)

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:46:57 AM AEST
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*is awestruck* Wow . . . Lindsey . . . this is beautiful.

. . . what am I saying? It's a lot more than beautiful; it's touching, romantic, near flawless, sweet . . . I love every inch of it :).

And, especially in light of recent events, you show what a good person you really are by writing this ^^. *hugs Lindsey*

--Nora

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:18:08 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:25:39 AM AEST
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This is exceedingly gorgeous, and words cannot do it justice...tears, perhaps, but nothing so simple as words or accolades. All I can say is thank you, from the depths of my soul. I absolutely love it.

Truly,
-Dan

Re: Lover's Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:06:14 PM AEST
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So elegant...

Happiness is in reach; no longer to chase.

That sums up everything , for everybody im sure. Its an exhausting process but so worth it..

Lots of Love
Vanessa ( 090404 )

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