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Array ( [sid] => 53290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what I hide is what I want noone to find [time] => 2004-06-23 00:48:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A fool is what I have become!
This thought seeing what I have done.
I apologize for I am in pain.
crying my heart out
till the river is full
completing the plan
I thought it would be over
only now the lies begin
as I grow away from me
this is no way to be free
hurting the one who should care
I do not know how to be honest inside
that could be why it is me I cannot find
noone know who I am anymore
until I can open my doors
maybe some day
I will cme out to show the world
and stop hiding from what I allowed myself to become
to some they they think they know who I have become
to others they pray I will let my heart be my guide
until I feel it is the right time
noone will know what mysteries I hide inside [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Hearts [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

what I hide is what I want noone to find

Contributed by Hearts on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:48:46 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A fool is what I have become!
This thought seeing what I have done.
I apologize for I am in pain.
crying my heart out
till the river is full
completing the plan
I thought it would be over
only now the lies begin
as I grow away from me
this is no way to be free
hurting the one who should care
I do not know how to be honest inside
that could be why it is me I cannot find
noone know who I am anymore
until I can open my doors
maybe some day
I will cme out to show the world
and stop hiding from what I allowed myself to become
to some they they think they know who I have become
to others they pray I will let my heart be my guide
until I feel it is the right time
noone will know what mysteries I hide inside

Copyright © Hearts ... [ 2004-06-23 00:48:46]
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Re: what I hide is what I want noone to find (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:09:15 AM AEST
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this write stuns me as I had jus started my latest WHY DO WE?
but at the same time I was deep in thought and your write pops up next on my putor and I paused to read it.
Very stong, powerfull magic write!
huggs,
emy

Re: what I hide is what I want noone to find (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:29:26 AM AEST
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Deep, mysterious. It expresses a feeling without exposing yourself to the world. well done my friend.
-andrew

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