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Array ( [sid] => 53289 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Keep Dreaming... [time] => 2004-06-23 00:40:04 [hometext] => This is about going over a girls house who I had feelings for and leaving without telling her. It would turn out she felt the same. Unfourtunatly a little too late... comments welcomed! [bodytext] => My shoes get broken in again
Walking home from another scene of pain
The soles are like my heart itself
Wearing thin with every ounce of guilt
Should I pick up the pace or slow it down
or should I re-think my words & turn around
I have little left in me to speak
My legs are tired and my body's weak
I wish I had someone to take me home
Or somewhere to stay where I'm not alone
This place I call my head is full of fear
Drowning every sensless thought with tears
I wish I had the perfect life
Or at least powers to make everything right
Keep deaming is what I tell myself
It keeps me alive, It keeps me well [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 14 [informant] => WakeNsnoWboarder [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Keep Dreaming...

Contributed by WakeNsnoWboarder on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:40:04 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

My shoes get broken in again
Walking home from another scene of pain
The soles are like my heart itself
Wearing thin with every ounce of guilt
Should I pick up the pace or slow it down
or should I re-think my words & turn around
I have little left in me to speak
My legs are tired and my body's weak
I wish I had someone to take me home
Or somewhere to stay where I'm not alone
This place I call my head is full of fear
Drowning every sensless thought with tears
I wish I had the perfect life
Or at least powers to make everything right
Keep deaming is what I tell myself
It keeps me alive, It keeps me well

Copyright © WakeNsnoWboarder ... [ 2004-06-23 00:40:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Keep Dreaming... (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:45:24 AM AEST
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Wow once again a fantastic poem. It is obvious that you have a lot of talent for writing poetry. It so great to see guys expressing their feelings through poems. I know most guys are embarrassed to admit they write poetry because they are afraid they might sound gay if they did. A lot of girls like guys that have a sensitive side like that. Just as long as its not too sensitive. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I can't wait to read more of your writings.
*Natalie*

Re: Keep Dreaming... (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:45:41 AM AEST
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wow, such a beautiful write...Im sorry it was too late...what kept it like that? well I wish you the best in life...you have a lot of talent maybe one day youll be published like me...lol you deserve it...more than I do...your writing speaks truth, I could see this happening in my head...great write...lots of feeling and emotion flowing right through...keep it up, keep it coming...and I'll keep up with your writes...never give up on love...

much love,
Dani

Re: Keep Dreaming... (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:33:19 AM AEST
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This is one of my favorites I have ever read on this site. VERY well done my friend. You're very talented.
-andrew

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