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[aid] => mick
[title] => best class of my life
[time] => 2004-06-22 23:37:13
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[bodytext] => you stand at the front of the room yapping away i am gettin so irate with you and your bull***** you think you are the most important person i think your the worlds biggest ***** in my bag is my most prized possession unzip my bookbag and pull it out quickly stuff it away in my big oversized pant pocket walk up to your desk careful that you dont see pull the gun out and keep it out of your sight slowly and carefully i shoot out your right knee blood pours out and creates a river beneath you you collapse on the ground and fall forward slowly you raise your head and look into my eyes my face is blank but inside im jumping with glee ive wanted so long to see you in so much pain the students gasp and are terribly frightened i look back over at your tears falling to the ground tears pour out into the flowing river of your blood i raise the gun and instantly pull the trigger the bullet pierces throgh the skin of your left arm now both of your sides are consumed in pain you reach up to clench your arm with your hand i aim at your hand shoot out your knuckles your hand falls to the ground instantly knees slide out from underneath and you lie flat i take my gun and shoot our legs repeatdly your screams are deafening and your crys so loud the shooting stops so you can have a painful death i utter out my final words "i love you guys" in under a minute i shot you down and put you in pain next its my time to leave this deadly planet i point the gun at the side of my head with tears in my eyes i pull the trigger [comments] => 5 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 13 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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