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It hurts like a flame
That burns
Like the acid turns
In my stomach

I cant explain why
I wont even try
In this class

Cause way back when
I played this game then
They harassed me
It caused me so much trama
I’m not talking drama
What they did scard me
Forever my memory is will be

I’m so stupid
I think I’m not good enough
So I don’t even fuss
Or try
Cause why?
Girls like them are back again

They make me feel sad
Cause they just think of me as a fag
Nothing but and ugly, scumy hag

Someone better get them a bag
Cause they will throw up
They always cup their mouths around me
They are disgusted by everything they see about me
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Gym Class

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:12:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I hate this game
It hurts like a flame
That burns
Like the acid turns
In my stomach

I cant explain why
I wont even try
In this class

Cause way back when
I played this game then
They harassed me
It caused me so much trama
I’m not talking drama
What they did scard me
Forever my memory is will be

I’m so stupid
I think I’m not good enough
So I don’t even fuss
Or try
Cause why?
Girls like them are back again

They make me feel sad
Cause they just think of me as a fag
Nothing but and ugly, scumy hag

Someone better get them a bag
Cause they will throw up
They always cup their mouths around me
They are disgusted by everything they see about me

Copyright Â© willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-06-22 19:12:35]
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Re: Gym Class (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:22:03 PM AEST
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wow very sad...I liked it how ever it flowed well true emotions screamed....very good...

much love,
Dani

Re: Gym Class (User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:36:04 PM AEST
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I'm sorry you feel that way. I am on some of my school's sports teams, and I do see the way that some of those girls are. I am sorry they are like that to you. Just remember that it's not your social status that matters in life. I am sorry gym is so terrible for you. Good luck in life.

Re: Gym Class (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:38:53 PM AEST
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Oh I loved this poem. Who hasn't hated gym class. You're crazy if you liked it. Awesome write.

Re: Gym Class (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:58:18 PM AEST
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great write. just remember they're not so perfect if they have to put you down to make themselves feel big. keep your head up
-jt-

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