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Darkness surrounds our little world of living beings
A light from the darkness above us shines so beautifully
Shinning on the liquid filled with life
Too much silence it’s hurting the ears
Heat is taking over the air
Only liquid is cool
Too dark
Jump in anyway
Cool off
Liquid enters the body
From the holes that lead to the inside
Not the only ones in the liquid…
Feel something brush up against a body
An air bubble over there…
What is it?
A liquid life?
Another one of us living beings?
Pulling a leg
Pulling hard
Under the liquid
Can’t breath
Can’t see
A sudden pain sweeping over the body
Ripping at the covering of the bones
Too much pain
No air to breathe…
A complete blank to the thoughts, pain and life [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 13 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Time of Darkness

Contributed by pyrofungus on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:59:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

An eerie chill rises from the feet and up the back to the neck
Darkness surrounds our little world of living beings
A light from the darkness above us shines so beautifully
Shinning on the liquid filled with life
Too much silence it’s hurting the ears
Heat is taking over the air
Only liquid is cool
Too dark
Jump in anyway
Cool off
Liquid enters the body
From the holes that lead to the inside
Not the only ones in the liquid…
Feel something brush up against a body
An air bubble over there…
What is it?
A liquid life?
Another one of us living beings?
Pulling a leg
Pulling hard
Under the liquid
Can’t breath
Can’t see
A sudden pain sweeping over the body
Ripping at the covering of the bones
Too much pain
No air to breathe…
A complete blank to the thoughts, pain and life

Copyright Â© pyrofungus ... [ 2004-06-22 18:59:35]
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Re: A Time of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:12:22 PM AEST
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I really really really liked this one a lot...it had a lot of feeling and emotion i liked it keep it up and keep it coming....

read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...

much love,
Dani

Re: A Time of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by frejya on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:39:30 AM AEST
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nice one

me

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