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Array ( [sid] => 53230 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Farewell Muse [time] => 2004-06-22 18:51:08 [hometext] => Lost love and the death of my muse. [bodytext] => A rainy November night
A starving girl
A charming boy
Instantaneous connection
A kiss and conversation
Passionate encounter
Hotel room bliss
A quick escape
A familiar purple place
Much hotter than usual
Goodbyes, uncertainty
A lasting impression
Pages full of hope and longing
New York streets
Funny stuck door
Silly girl pretty smile
A cat with an attitude
Empty glass
Deeper conversation
Roots planted
Feelings at stake
A sweet glance
Caught up in romance
Poison in their veins
Entranced in each other
Slowly becoming one
Looks of envy surround
Taxi cab fun
Art, music, love out of control
Beautiful sleeping face
Another amazing goodbye
Pages full of emotion and love
Drunk phone calls
Singing, laughing
Professing love and pain
A shaded past
Cannot let go
Deeper roots still
Genuine love
Or crazy imagination?
Bright lights and temptation
A wall unable to scale
Damage beyond repair
Downward spiral
Thrown off course
True colors
Heart broken
Bottles empty
Hasty departure
Abandoned again
Out of control
Words of hate
A realization
Too late
Pencil out of ink
Cracked torn bruised
Solemn weeks
An awakening
Not meant to be
Dark where there once was
Blinding light
Empty pages
Gone but not forgotten
Farewell muse.
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Farewell Muse

Contributed by positivelypurple on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:51:08 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

A rainy November night
A starving girl
A charming boy
Instantaneous connection
A kiss and conversation
Passionate encounter
Hotel room bliss
A quick escape
A familiar purple place
Much hotter than usual
Goodbyes, uncertainty
A lasting impression
Pages full of hope and longing
New York streets
Funny stuck door
Silly girl pretty smile
A cat with an attitude
Empty glass
Deeper conversation
Roots planted
Feelings at stake
A sweet glance
Caught up in romance
Poison in their veins
Entranced in each other
Slowly becoming one
Looks of envy surround
Taxi cab fun
Art, music, love out of control
Beautiful sleeping face
Another amazing goodbye
Pages full of emotion and love
Drunk phone calls
Singing, laughing
Professing love and pain
A shaded past
Cannot let go
Deeper roots still
Genuine love
Or crazy imagination?
Bright lights and temptation
A wall unable to scale
Damage beyond repair
Downward spiral
Thrown off course
True colors
Heart broken
Bottles empty
Hasty departure
Abandoned again
Out of control
Words of hate
A realization
Too late
Pencil out of ink
Cracked torn bruised
Solemn weeks
An awakening
Not meant to be
Dark where there once was
Blinding light
Empty pages
Gone but not forgotten
Farewell muse.

Copyright © positivelypurple ... [ 2004-06-22 18:51:08]
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Re: Farewell Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:00:49 PM AEST
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I read this cause the band MUSE is one of my favorite bands...so I thought Id read this...thank god I wasnt dissapointed you would have puit their name to shame...lol I like dthis write a lot it had lots of feelings and emotions and it kept me interested till the very end....keep it up keep it coming...

read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...

wear your head on your shoulder and wear it high...

much love,
Dani

Re: Farewell Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:07:03 AM AEST
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great pace and progression. You told the story well in bright vivid images.

Re: Farewell Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:07:08 AM AEST
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Very good writing here.
Luv your nonchalant style of writing.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Farewell Muse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:57:58 PM AEST
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GREAT poem. I felt like I was watching a movie on fast forward. You paint a perfect picture with your words. And thanks for the comments on my poem. It was greatly appreciated. :~)

~Breezy

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