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Array ( [sid] => 5323 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Change [time] => 2002-10-20 08:45:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Now my life is taking a turn. Its going downhill. I knew something was amiss. But why this? I would never do anything like that. What a great time for this to happen.
It's so different. She was fine how she was. More than fine.
I came to this class today, wondering what to write about. Now I have something... Something I don't like, and I will never forget.
I have no say in her choices, but it was a choice that ruined a part of me. And she had no way of knowing.
Now I sit in class listening to a poem. I now know, that if I mess up in all my anger and grief, just once...that could be it. It would ruin it for her and me.
Now I look upon her beautiful face and realize its not so bad. I wish she would listen to what I have to say. I doubt she would, but there is always atleast once chance.
Now is my last chance. Can I do it? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 587 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Knowledge [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

A Change

Contributed by Knowledge on Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Now my life is taking a turn. Its going downhill. I knew something was amiss. But why this? I would never do anything like that. What a great time for this to happen.
It's so different. She was fine how she was. More than fine.
I came to this class today, wondering what to write about. Now I have something... Something I don't like, and I will never forget.
I have no say in her choices, but it was a choice that ruined a part of me. And she had no way of knowing.
Now I sit in class listening to a poem. I now know, that if I mess up in all my anger and grief, just once...that could be it. It would ruin it for her and me.
Now I look upon her beautiful face and realize its not so bad. I wish she would listen to what I have to say. I doubt she would, but there is always atleast once chance.
Now is my last chance. Can I do it?

Copyright © Knowledge ... [ 2002-10-20 08:45:00]
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Re: A Change (User Rating: 1 )
by crucifixioncross on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 06:19:01 AM AEST
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ok knowledge im not posting this comment about the poem itself im posting it so you see it...i dont know if you noticed it but your being absolutely ignorant of everything i post

i just want to know why...if its not good then tell me...any feedback helps even if its negative so for once be real but if your just ignoring it because you think all of it was in my book...everything ive posted on the site is stuff you havent seen...well anyways 'Day Thirteen' is up now....

-crucifixioncross

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