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And still my heart beats on

Believe me when I say
That I need to hear you today

Hold your breath
I'll breath for both of us

Think of me
In your darkest hour

Think of me
When you're all alone

Your fan blades spin
But you can't feel the air

You turn on the lights
But there's nobody there

I say all the wrong things
At all the right times

I have my doubts
But I always change my mind

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Still the day goes on

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Still the day goes on
And still my heart beats on

Believe me when I say
That I need to hear you today

Hold your breath
I'll breath for both of us

Think of me
In your darkest hour

Think of me
When you're all alone

Your fan blades spin
But you can't feel the air

You turn on the lights
But there's nobody there

I say all the wrong things
At all the right times

I have my doubts
But I always change my mind

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2004-06-22 18:24:43]
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Re: Still the day goes on (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:32:38 PM AEST
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wow that was a very sad write lots of feelings and emotions I loved it however keep your head held high its meant to be that way dont hang it low...dont bring yourself down...keep it up keep it coming...great write!!!

much love,
Dani

Re: Still the day goes on (User Rating: 1 )
by xthe_lonely_onex on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:42:36 PM AEST
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I must say, that is a teriffic poem. It shows just the right amount of feeling without overdoing it and I could fully relate to what you were saying. Please, keep writing. Your poetry is unique and fantastic...

-Sara

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