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Array ( [sid] => 53222 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heartbreak [time] => 2004-06-22 17:51:53 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for an english class and what I am talking about really hurt me emotionally. Its about my mom and our horrible arguement over nothing- which I moved with my dad on Christmas day. : ( ! [bodytext] => I knew this when I came back
from all the heartbreak.
I knew this when you said sorry
for causing the heartbreak.
I knew this when you said come home,
there will be no heartbreak.
Is this true?
The pain of my 14th year
will never disappear.

This hurts inside even though you said sorry,
no matter it hurts inside and out,
and fills my heart with agony.
It's like a nightmare
of the day I had to leave-
packed with tears.
Pain won't heal in a year
for it hurts, hurts.

Neva,
How could you?

I dream of it
like its just another bad yesterday.
I can't forget it
for we haven't spoke of that day.
I hurt from it
because you act as if nothing happened
and you go about your days happily.
I cry from it,
my holidays are now drowning in pain.
I lost respect from it
for you hurt your own like never imagined.
I lay there, tears falling
soaking the poor pillow with pain from my heart,
but no matter how many tears I shed,
it still HURTS.

Neva,
How could you?

I loved you with all my heart. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 48 [informant] => JacquelineAnn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Heartbreak

Contributed by JacquelineAnn on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I knew this when I came back
from all the heartbreak.
I knew this when you said sorry
for causing the heartbreak.
I knew this when you said come home,
there will be no heartbreak.
Is this true?
The pain of my 14th year
will never disappear.

This hurts inside even though you said sorry,
no matter it hurts inside and out,
and fills my heart with agony.
It's like a nightmare
of the day I had to leave-
packed with tears.
Pain won't heal in a year
for it hurts, hurts.

Neva,
How could you?

I dream of it
like its just another bad yesterday.
I can't forget it
for we haven't spoke of that day.
I hurt from it
because you act as if nothing happened
and you go about your days happily.
I cry from it,
my holidays are now drowning in pain.
I lost respect from it
for you hurt your own like never imagined.
I lay there, tears falling
soaking the poor pillow with pain from my heart,
but no matter how many tears I shed,
it still HURTS.

Neva,
How could you?

I loved you with all my heart.

Copyright © JacquelineAnn ... [ 2004-06-22 17:51:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Heartbreak (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:29:02 PM AEST
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wow, Im so sorry that you went trough that I wish I was able to help but you know your wounds will heal you will get better and youll be a strnger person...keep your head held high its put on your shoulder to be seen dont hang it low....great write...

read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...

much love,
Dani

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