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Array ( [sid] => 53207 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOST WITHOUT YOU [time] => 2004-06-22 16:44:31 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS THE DAY OF THE FUNERAL AND READ IT TO MY MOTHER THIS WAYS MY WAY OF SAYING GOODBYE [bodytext] =>
THE DAY BEGAN WITH AN ACHE IN MY SOUL FEELING LOST AND DISCONNECTED FROM THE WOMB OF BIRTH.

THE PHONE RINGS AND IT IS FUNNY BECAUSE IT NEVER RANG THIS WAY BEFORE.

THE TONE OF SHADOWS TRAILING THE VOICE ON THE OTHER END.

THE MOLD THATS LIKE YOURS HAS FADED AWAY I SCREAM WITH RIPPLED AGONY & SHACKLED TEARS.

I FOUGHT THE NEWS WITH DISBELIEF.

HOW COULD THIS BE SHE WAS JUST LAUGHING AND SMILING AT ME.

SHOOK, SHATTERED AND ANGRY HOW COULD SHE LEAVE ME SELFISH I WAS BUT NOT ALONE, NO GOOD BYE STILL IN PAIN.

SHE LAID IN GRACE IN MY FLOWING EYES MY SISTER TORN APART FOR SHE LOST HER BEST FRIEND AND A SHOULDER OF COMFORT.

I HELD HER HAND AND SAID STRONG WE MUST BECAUSE IT’S JUST YOU AND ME.

I WALK CLOSE AND WHISPER THE ECHO OF MY VOICEIN HER EAR YOU’RE MY HERO MOM I LOVE YOU.

FOR THE LITE I SO ADMIRED WAS DISTIGUSHED PLEASE BRING ME PEACE I WHISPERED TO MYSELF.

TRAVEL TO THE PLACE OF OUR BIRTH WHERE CHILDHOOD MEMORIES SURFACE AND FLASH THE GOOD TIMES.

AND HERE WE ARE MOURNER DRENCH IN BLACK TO LAY TO REST THE STRENGTH
OF MY FAMILY AND HALF OUR HEARTS GO WITH YOU.

HOW COULD WE EVER SAY GOODBYE WHEN I KNOW YOU ARE NOT GONE BECAUSE IN MY HEART YOU LIVE ON FOR ENTERNITY?
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 32 [informant] => SPOKENWORDARTIST [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
LOST WITHOUT YOU

Contributed by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:44:31 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry




THE DAY BEGAN WITH AN ACHE IN MY SOUL FEELING LOST AND DISCONNECTED FROM THE WOMB OF BIRTH.

THE PHONE RINGS AND IT IS FUNNY BECAUSE IT NEVER RANG THIS WAY BEFORE.

THE TONE OF SHADOWS TRAILING THE VOICE ON THE OTHER END.

THE MOLD THATS LIKE YOURS HAS FADED AWAY I SCREAM WITH RIPPLED AGONY & SHACKLED TEARS.

I FOUGHT THE NEWS WITH DISBELIEF.

HOW COULD THIS BE SHE WAS JUST LAUGHING AND SMILING AT ME.

SHOOK, SHATTERED AND ANGRY HOW COULD SHE LEAVE ME SELFISH I WAS BUT NOT ALONE, NO GOOD BYE STILL IN PAIN.

SHE LAID IN GRACE IN MY FLOWING EYES MY SISTER TORN APART FOR SHE LOST HER BEST FRIEND AND A SHOULDER OF COMFORT.

I HELD HER HAND AND SAID STRONG WE MUST BECAUSE IT’S JUST YOU AND ME.

I WALK CLOSE AND WHISPER THE ECHO OF MY VOICEIN HER EAR YOU’RE MY HERO MOM I LOVE YOU.

FOR THE LITE I SO ADMIRED WAS DISTIGUSHED PLEASE BRING ME PEACE I WHISPERED TO MYSELF.

TRAVEL TO THE PLACE OF OUR BIRTH WHERE CHILDHOOD MEMORIES SURFACE AND FLASH THE GOOD TIMES.

AND HERE WE ARE MOURNER DRENCH IN BLACK TO LAY TO REST THE STRENGTH
OF MY FAMILY AND HALF OUR HEARTS GO WITH YOU.

HOW COULD WE EVER SAY GOODBYE WHEN I KNOW YOU ARE NOT GONE BECAUSE IN MY HEART YOU LIVE ON FOR ENTERNITY?




Copyright © SPOKENWORDARTIST ... [ 2004-06-22 16:44:31]
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Re: LOST WITHOUT YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:51:32 AM AEST
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this is such a beautiful poem, im sorry 2 hear about ur loss, u and ur sister shud stik 2getha, so u'll alwayz hav some1 2 lean on, and 2 be leant upon by. PM me if u eva wanna talk.




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