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Array ( [sid] => 53168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Church vs. Life [time] => 2004-06-22 12:26:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My church is such an
interesting topic to talk about
because everytime I go there
my route is the greatest thing to doubt
where am I going after life?
what’s to come after death?
After the reaper and his sythe
What’s to come after death?
If I start hating certain someones
If I think of bad things on what to do
Will it be just like another lame Scream pun
Will I still hear from the dove a gentle coo?
After death will I feel your warm embrace?
Will I see you,
your father and the holy spirits shining face?
Or just because of hating 1 measly soul or even two
Will I be thrown into the eternal burning stew?
I’m asking you on what to do
To be like the pouring rain
Or come down like the mornings dew?
How do I reach to a soul so sick and twisted
A soul that would do any thing Any where
In the book of life how can I get it listed?
A person with a personality so rare
That’s the end of my wanna be song
I hope you liked it I hope it was good
Not like some flow coming str8 frum da hood [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 11 [informant] => Blest474 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Church vs. Life

Contributed by Blest474 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:26:49 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

My church is such an
interesting topic to talk about
because everytime I go there
my route is the greatest thing to doubt
where am I going after life?
what’s to come after death?
After the reaper and his sythe
What’s to come after death?
If I start hating certain someones
If I think of bad things on what to do
Will it be just like another lame Scream pun
Will I still hear from the dove a gentle coo?
After death will I feel your warm embrace?
Will I see you,
your father and the holy spirits shining face?
Or just because of hating 1 measly soul or even two
Will I be thrown into the eternal burning stew?
I’m asking you on what to do
To be like the pouring rain
Or come down like the mornings dew?
How do I reach to a soul so sick and twisted
A soul that would do any thing Any where
In the book of life how can I get it listed?
A person with a personality so rare
That’s the end of my wanna be song
I hope you liked it I hope it was good
Not like some flow coming str8 frum da hood

Copyright Â© Blest474 ... [ 2004-06-22 12:26:49]
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Re: Church vs. Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:25:58 PM AEST
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I know what you mean, religion can be so annoying sometimes. It's kind of like a cult if you think about it...but hey, that's just my look on it.

Re: Church vs. Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 10:58:06 PM AEST
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hey
good write
keep it up

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