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Array ( [sid] => 53124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hail To Thee [time] => 2004-06-22 02:48:31 [hometext] => I wrote this a long time ago. Don't hate me. Feel free to comment. [bodytext] => Hail to thee, noble warrior
You saved the village at dawn
And note this, noble warrior
You are but a pawn
In my greatest plan to shape the land
You fought so hard to save
And hail to thee, peasant of the town
Scurry about your business
Never mind the destruction around
Enjoy eternal sleep with your mistress
It is my ultimate plan to shape the land
And you shall not be saved
Hail to thee, King of the Castle
Retire to your chambers and rest
Don't glance out your balcony this night
For all you will see is death
It is my dire plan to shape the land
And you shall not be saved
And Hail to thee, Creature of the Abyss
Spread your wings and rise
Join me in battle this night
For I have a surprise
It is my supreme plan to destroy the land
You for so long wished to send to its' grave [comments] => 4 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 40 [informant] => TheLastStringCut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Hail To Thee

Contributed by TheLastStringCut on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:48:31 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Hail to thee, noble warrior
You saved the village at dawn
And note this, noble warrior
You are but a pawn
In my greatest plan to shape the land
You fought so hard to save
And hail to thee, peasant of the town
Scurry about your business
Never mind the destruction around
Enjoy eternal sleep with your mistress
It is my ultimate plan to shape the land
And you shall not be saved
Hail to thee, King of the Castle
Retire to your chambers and rest
Don't glance out your balcony this night
For all you will see is death
It is my dire plan to shape the land
And you shall not be saved
And Hail to thee, Creature of the Abyss
Spread your wings and rise
Join me in battle this night
For I have a surprise
It is my supreme plan to destroy the land
You for so long wished to send to its' grave

Copyright © TheLastStringCut ... [ 2004-06-22 02:48:31]
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Re: Hail To Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:02:14 AM AEST
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hey this is great , well done to you

pixie xx

Re: Hail To Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:47:39 AM AEST
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your wording is incredible.. great write!*

Re: Hail To Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:43:59 PM AEST
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i really like this one jeff..you did a great job on it.. well u do a great job on everything *smiles* but especially this poem and the one u wrote for me...:D love ya.. AMI JO

Re: Hail To Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by Strawberry on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 10:56:00 PM AEST
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very well written
keep up the amazing work
=]

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