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Through endless night
It's all alone
Yet still it fight

It shines for me
It shines for you
It gives us hope
And pulls us through

When you're alone
No friends in sight
Within your heart
You'll find a light

So let it shine
Through endless night
It'll give you strength
And hope and might [comments] => 8 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 19 [informant] => wachumiri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

The Lonely Star

Contributed by wachumiri on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:03:06 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

One star still shines
Through endless night
It's all alone
Yet still it fight

It shines for me
It shines for you
It gives us hope
And pulls us through

When you're alone
No friends in sight
Within your heart
You'll find a light

So let it shine
Through endless night
It'll give you strength
And hope and might

Copyright © wachumiri ... [ 2004-06-22 02:03:06]
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Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:07:00 AM AEST
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this is a great poem

pixie xx

Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:49:57 AM AEST
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very nice *

Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:19:53 PM AEST
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oh! beautiful poem, david:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:54:10 PM AEST
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as your adopted sister, David, I will be truthful:

nice, but kind of cutesy and cliche'-ish but not bad

Happy one year anniversary of us being brother and sister! (I was reading my journal and tomorrow will be one year sicne we became friends. awww!)
Em

Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:14:06 PM AEST
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Ahhh...that was pretty, David. I like the whole light from within thing. Very inspiring.
~Carrie~

Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:25:26 PM AEST
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Simple, yet inspiring all the same. I wonder if I've seen that star before...

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 07:33:35 PM AEST
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ha! It would be a lonely star in smoggy ol' southern California... there's only about five after all.
*gloats in the fact that Oregon is very starry*

Anyway, take care. Write some more - you're getting rusty.

Andrew

Re: The Lonely Star (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:41:54 PM AEST
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Kind of reminds you that the only place you can find true happiness is within yourself. Great message here David.

Ann

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