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Array ( [sid] => 53111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2004-06-22 00:34:10 [hometext] => Something I thought of off the top of my head..... Doesn't all really go together I know but I wanted to write a poem and I just thought of this one...... [bodytext] => My emotions are swelling up inside of me
They're aching to get out.

I'm trying to hide them from everyone
But it's so hard not to just scream them out.

I want people to know how I feel
I want them to see how much love I hold for you.

But none of them understand
They never will.

I've tried to explain to them
But they won't listen.

So I hide my emotions
From everone but you.

Sometimes they all seem so overwhelming
But then I remind myself I have you and everythings better.

You make everything bad in my life go away
And everything good in my life seem closer.

If only I could be with you right now
My whole world would seem right.

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You

Contributed by jishes_4_ever on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:34:10 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

My emotions are swelling up inside of me
They're aching to get out.

I'm trying to hide them from everyone
But it's so hard not to just scream them out.

I want people to know how I feel
I want them to see how much love I hold for you.

But none of them understand
They never will.

I've tried to explain to them
But they won't listen.

So I hide my emotions
From everone but you.

Sometimes they all seem so overwhelming
But then I remind myself I have you and everythings better.

You make everything bad in my life go away
And everything good in my life seem closer.

If only I could be with you right now
My whole world would seem right.

Copyright © jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-06-22 00:34:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:50:29 AM AEST
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Please don't change any thing?
You've said it aall in this verse so u pulling my trick jus reach up-n-grab it when it floats by.
A masterpeice!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:12:16 AM AEST
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i really loved this one, look forward to reading more from you

pixie xx

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