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Array ( [sid] => 53089 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Acting out on the Razors [time] => 2004-06-21 22:13:33 [hometext] => yet another one of my depressing cries for help I guess you might say....aw ***** it...lol comments appreciated... [bodytext] => cutting away my sorrow
bleeding away my pain
I dont wanna live to see tomorrow
I wonder why im insane
slitting away everything I know
sometimes I think aloud...wanna stay
other times I just wanna go
This life so full of *****
like a ***** torturous pit
this world full of grief
cutting away so I feel relief
sorrows are flooding the knife
taking me down, killing my life
forget what I have said
'cus tomorrow ill most likely be dead
within a second I die
within a week my family will cry
at my funeral, mourning their loss
in the casket I count my gains
and all I had to do was slash away these pains
the blood was dripping so sweetly
contemplated this for so long
wondering who is singing this song
lying in the ground, with a tear on my grave
and to think I didnt wanna be saved
the fabric of my life is depleating
and my life slowly slips away
I wonder why I wanted to go, or live another day
the delicate essance of my life slips further from me
my depression the one thing you didnt see
the scars on my wrist
yes im *****in *****
now Ill take my life
beholding this bloody knife
taking all of my ***** with the blade
my family and friends woulda liked it if I had stayed
but its too late
for I opened my hand to fate.

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Acting out on the Razors

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:13:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

cutting away my sorrow
bleeding away my pain
I dont wanna live to see tomorrow
I wonder why im insane
slitting away everything I know
sometimes I think aloud...wanna stay
other times I just wanna go
This life so full of *****
like a ***** torturous pit
this world full of grief
cutting away so I feel relief
sorrows are flooding the knife
taking me down, killing my life
forget what I have said
'cus tomorrow ill most likely be dead
within a second I die
within a week my family will cry
at my funeral, mourning their loss
in the casket I count my gains
and all I had to do was slash away these pains
the blood was dripping so sweetly
contemplated this for so long
wondering who is singing this song
lying in the ground, with a tear on my grave
and to think I didnt wanna be saved
the fabric of my life is depleating
and my life slowly slips away
I wonder why I wanted to go, or live another day
the delicate essance of my life slips further from me
my depression the one thing you didnt see
the scars on my wrist
yes im *****in *****
now Ill take my life
beholding this bloody knife
taking all of my ***** with the blade
my family and friends woulda liked it if I had stayed
but its too late
for I opened my hand to fate.

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-21 22:13:33]
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Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:17:34 PM AEST
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i feel like this some of-... most of the time. very good poem. it captures a lot of emotion

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:19:32 PM AEST
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WOW only word to describe it...great wrute girl friend lol i don't know why i said that. Very powerful....word of advice you better stay.....

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:45:44 PM AEST
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We all have our nightmares, some cut fast and others use slower means, but come to the same ends. You will have sweet and beautiful days ahead.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:14:56 PM AEST
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very powerful. fate is what you make of it.

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:38:25 AM AEST
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This is so sad and heart wrenching. It's written well tho.
I really don't understand but I pray for u.
My heart goes out to u and all the others that do this.
I wish I knew how to help u.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:24:52 AM AEST
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this hit home with me .......... you written this expertly

pixie xx

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by lexxie on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:04:21 PM AEST
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i have no words this was so powerful i loved it

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:57:17 PM AEST
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i can relate... very well put*

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by iluvpencils on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:31:19 PM AEST
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I can relate so much to this. I cut and have been trying to stop (I think I've finally made it though). You have wonderful talent, that was beautifully written. I especially liked the first part. I hope you don't mind but I added you on MSN...thanks for your comments on my stuff btw. See ya.

Re: Acting out on the Razors (User Rating: 1 )
by IncoherentGirl on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 03:02:32 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this i'm a cutter too.this wuz a great write
i write kinda the same stuff u might like my poems as much as i liked urs but first i gotta post sum more of my poems. keep writing

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