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A shadow crossed my path today,
a grey line of doubt.
This shadow had an uncertain voice
that quivers in my inner-self.

It wasn't so much what it said,
but how it felt within the cavity
of my body, the depth of my soul.
The part I thought was unreachable.

It weaves itself like spiderwebs
in my thoughts, trying to catch
what I know to be truth and need,
this greyness shall not become darkness.

I will fight it like the ememy
it appears to be, and chase the voice
of uncertainy away, the quiver will
leave like the night, as the sun rises.

Author: June E. Miller
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The Shadow Of Doubt

Contributed by Justalady on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:21:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A shadow crossed my path today,
a grey line of doubt.
This shadow had an uncertain voice
that quivers in my inner-self.

It wasn't so much what it said,
but how it felt within the cavity
of my body, the depth of my soul.
The part I thought was unreachable.

It weaves itself like spiderwebs
in my thoughts, trying to catch
what I know to be truth and need,
this greyness shall not become darkness.

I will fight it like the ememy
it appears to be, and chase the voice
of uncertainy away, the quiver will
leave like the night, as the sun rises.

Author: June E. Miller

Copyright © Justalady ... [ 2004-06-21 20:21:15]
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Re: The Shadow Of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:31:39 PM AEST
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Deep emotional poem. I like the way you describe it as spiderwebs and how when the night fades away the sun rises and everything is okay. Good Write.
*Natalie*

Re: The Shadow Of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by angelav on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:53:02 PM AEST
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Great imagery, and very easy to read. Nice pacing. We all fight doubt and this expresses the struggle beautifully.

Re: The Shadow Of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:04:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece with lovely imagery.

Re: The Shadow Of Doubt (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:41:35 PM AEST
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Ah with such a sweet and beautiful heart, I know you will win every fight. May the sweet sunshine fill everyday for you.

Thank you June, this was beautiful.

Chris

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