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Array ( [sid] => 53023 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Notes to Mom [time] => 2004-06-21 14:43:58 [hometext] => for my mom, who has never let me down....May not be the best poem put its all true...my mommy is my best friend and saved me more than I could ever let any one know. [bodytext] => Mommy its me your little girl:
Mommy sorry for trying to sell the baby,
I promise I won't do it again,
one question mommy,
what about my puppy?
Mommy I'm crying now,
You say it will ease but I don't know how,
you said there will be some one new,
please tell me this is true
that i won't hurt forever
and this to will get better.
Mommy I made it
Can you beleive I graduated,
Mommy Whats worng
why do you cry
is it some thing I did?
Mommy its me don't leave me now,
mommy fight for me show me how
how to be strong
the road seems so long
don't leave me now, i can't make it.
Mommy I do i make you proud,
Mommy I'm having a baby,
but I'll be all alone, you were right about him
Mommy help me please
Tell me how to put the pain to ease,
My baby is dying,
but I'm the only one crying,
Mommy I found someone new,
Mommy your words were true,
I know he's much older than me,
he says he loves only me,
I can't beleive you like him mom,
Its 4 am and i had to tell you first,
We are getting married,
Mom please please be home...
I can't do this alone...
Today I got the call,
I was standing in the hall,
the voice on the other end
says he's dying
Mommy he's in a coma, he will never wake,
****you God,
What did I do???
Why must you take this one away from me?
He has 3 Children, ,
How can you take him like this,
He's a good man he don't need this,
Mommy Please tell me what to do,
My heart is broken in two.
Mom its me,
I just wanted to say I love you...
Just wanted you to know
I'd never make it with out you.
Mom Its me I promise one day I will make you proud
Mommy I love you... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 55 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Notes to Mom

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:43:58 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Mommy its me your little girl:
Mommy sorry for trying to sell the baby,
I promise I won't do it again,
one question mommy,
what about my puppy?
Mommy I'm crying now,
You say it will ease but I don't know how,
you said there will be some one new,
please tell me this is true
that i won't hurt forever
and this to will get better.
Mommy I made it
Can you beleive I graduated,
Mommy Whats worng
why do you cry
is it some thing I did?
Mommy its me don't leave me now,
mommy fight for me show me how
how to be strong
the road seems so long
don't leave me now, i can't make it.
Mommy I do i make you proud,
Mommy I'm having a baby,
but I'll be all alone, you were right about him
Mommy help me please
Tell me how to put the pain to ease,
My baby is dying,
but I'm the only one crying,
Mommy I found someone new,
Mommy your words were true,
I know he's much older than me,
he says he loves only me,
I can't beleive you like him mom,
Its 4 am and i had to tell you first,
We are getting married,
Mom please please be home...
I can't do this alone...
Today I got the call,
I was standing in the hall,
the voice on the other end
says he's dying
Mommy he's in a coma, he will never wake,
****you God,
What did I do???
Why must you take this one away from me?
He has 3 Children, ,
How can you take him like this,
He's a good man he don't need this,
Mommy Please tell me what to do,
My heart is broken in two.
Mom its me,
I just wanted to say I love you...
Just wanted you to know
I'd never make it with out you.
Mom Its me I promise one day I will make you proud
Mommy I love you...




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Re: Notes to Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by badboyzlover on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:51:10 PM AEST
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Wow that was reallly strong i really liked it alot. i'm sure you made your mom proud.


Re: Notes to Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:21:53 PM AEST
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Always feel that way with her & let her know! I wish I had my mom still to let her know how much she meant to me! Great write! Christina


Re: Notes to Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:13:02 AM AEST
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wow, this was really good,

pixie xx




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