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this lovely gem from the sky
to look upon her so lovely
makes this man want to cry
beauty splashed upon the earth
where ever she should roam
lighting up bright pathways
a diamond in my eye
she is a breath of fresh air
a blooming rose
simply just a piece of perfection [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 22 [informant] => recklessguy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Piece of perfection

Contributed by recklessguy on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:52:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Heavens opened up and dropped
this lovely gem from the sky
to look upon her so lovely
makes this man want to cry
beauty splashed upon the earth
where ever she should roam
lighting up bright pathways
a diamond in my eye
she is a breath of fresh air
a blooming rose
simply just a piece of perfection




Copyright © recklessguy ... [ 2004-06-21 13:52:00]
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Re: Piece of perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:58:06 PM AEST
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That is a beautiful write I loved this whole thing every word of it I loved it all the same...it reminds me a lot of what my ex writes about me...and that makes me feel good inside so I hope that whoever you write this about feels the same way...well keep your head high you have talent....

keep it up keep it coming....

read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think

much love,
Dani


Re: Piece of perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:59:20 PM AEST
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breath taking you write from your heart thats what its all about
michelle




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