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Array ( [sid] => 53007 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unable too please. [time] => 2004-06-21 13:24:54 [hometext] => Please comment!!!! [bodytext] => Able too keep you happy
For so it seems
Yet you yell and scream
Why at me

I do what you want
Yet not pleasing you
Always confused
Never enough

If its not a constant war between you
Its ***** talking too me
You seem too think I cant get enough
Even though I tell you thats enough

Your both my parents
Being drivin away
Always happy too leave
And sad too return

One day Ill be gone
You wont know where
Ill keep in touch with one
But the other not as much [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 32 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Unable too please.

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Able too keep you happy
For so it seems
Yet you yell and scream
Why at me

I do what you want
Yet not pleasing you
Always confused
Never enough

If its not a constant war between you
Its ***** talking too me
You seem too think I cant get enough
Even though I tell you thats enough

Your both my parents
Being drivin away
Always happy too leave
And sad too return

One day Ill be gone
You wont know where
Ill keep in touch with one
But the other not as much

Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-06-21 13:24:54]
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Re: Unable too please. (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:30:47 PM AEST
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Thie is very sad I too agree with you leaving and staying in touch with one, I say it too myself everyday thats how its gonna be but I think it may be hard to live without my parents but I may be strong and live without them...I relate to this one a lot however I enjoyed it a lot too...very powerful your feelings and emotions are flowing through it and I can totally see that...beautiful write

keep it up keep it coming

read and comment my stuff if you want id love to hear what you think...

much love,
Dani

Re: Unable too please. (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:55:32 PM AEST
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when you get older you will look back and smile things are hard now they work out later in life(most times that is)

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