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Array ( [sid] => 52971 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Hate. [time] => 2004-06-21 09:02:44 [hometext] => I was just looking through one of my old folders of poems and found this. It was written when I was 12. I was the only person in my family to talk about the abuse we had suffered. And the rest of this is about the bullying in school and my self-harm... [bodytext] => I hate!! My life,
‘Coz it’s *****,
And the ones that I love won’t admit,
They’ve been hit!

The pain inside,
Its deep,
It hurts,
Like an open wound,
Stuffed with handfuls of,
DIRT!!

She keeps coming up,
Asks “what wrong with you?”
She says its ‘coz,
“I care for you!”

But she makes fun of me,
Every-day,
She’s the one that makes me.
Feel this way!!

I’ve got it in my bag,
The sharp spike,
“Rip! Rip! Rip!”
That I like.

I ain’t done it now,
For 5 days,
But I’m not saying I won’t,
‘Coz I don’t think that way!!

I know I could die,
From one little,
SLASH!!
But I could also,
If my head was,
BASHED!!

The choice is mine,
I know that now,
But neither way,
Will I say?
“Ow!”
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I Hate.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:02:44 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I hate!! My life,
‘Coz it’s *****,
And the ones that I love won’t admit,
They’ve been hit!

The pain inside,
Its deep,
It hurts,
Like an open wound,
Stuffed with handfuls of,
DIRT!!

She keeps coming up,
Asks “what wrong with you?”
She says its ‘coz,
“I care for you!”

But she makes fun of me,
Every-day,
She’s the one that makes me.
Feel this way!!

I’ve got it in my bag,
The sharp spike,
“Rip! Rip! Rip!”
That I like.

I ain’t done it now,
For 5 days,
But I’m not saying I won’t,
‘Coz I don’t think that way!!

I know I could die,
From one little,
SLASH!!
But I could also,
If my head was,
BASHED!!

The choice is mine,
I know that now,
But neither way,
Will I say?
“Ow!”

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-06-21 09:02:44]
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Re: I Hate. (User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:06:53 PM AEST
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That was an amazing poem! You were only 12?! Very deep. I am sorry you had to endure such hard times. I hope times are better for you now!

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