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Why do I slip into this state,
Almost just feeling hate,
Yet want nothing more than to hide,
For time to ride.

I keep these feelings bottled up inside.
Maybe its time to they died.
Feeling like such a slut,
With nothing left to cut.

I try to express my hidden pain,
Just to keep myself sane.
Yet this does not seem enough.
It is all way too tough.

Many people hear my words,
Yet do they really read the meaning in my words.
There may be an obvious meaning, yet that is not the one.
That’s just not how things are done.

Cried I have tried.
Yet the tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
What I need is a hug.
To feel warm, safe and snug.

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Tears won’t come to push the pain aside.

Contributed by little_genna on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:57:21 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Why do I slip into this state,
Almost just feeling hate,
Yet want nothing more than to hide,
For time to ride.

I keep these feelings bottled up inside.
Maybe its time to they died.
Feeling like such a slut,
With nothing left to cut.

I try to express my hidden pain,
Just to keep myself sane.
Yet this does not seem enough.
It is all way too tough.

Many people hear my words,
Yet do they really read the meaning in my words.
There may be an obvious meaning, yet that is not the one.
That’s just not how things are done.

Cried I have tried.
Yet the tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
What I need is a hug.
To feel warm, safe and snug.

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-06-21 04:57:21]
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Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside. (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:50:45 AM AEST
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hey!! thats just how i have been feelng lately too!
especially yeserday.
today's ok though...
i hope that you're feeling better now.

Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:01:06 AM AEST
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Awwwwww (((((HUGS))))) I know this feeling very well, you have great talent

pixie xx

Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside. (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:29:18 AM AEST
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auh this is so sad lil-genna, I hope that you will pick yourself up soon. This was a really good write that you put your all into. Very real & full of emotion. Gripping. Thanks for sharing, feel beter soon.
Corinna

Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:15:54 AM AEST
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**hugs** im here if you need or want to talk, this is wonderfully written, genna, your point comes across loud and clear:) more hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside. (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 10:57:59 AM AEST
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hey hun, this one I can really feel your pain in. I wish I could feel this way sometimes. You know where I am when ever you do need a hug.

*-; Jiae ;-*

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