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The scent of your hair, the clothes that you wear
Keep me intoxicated and dreaming

You’re a walking suicide
These razor blades, have seen better days
Of butterfly kisses and screaming

And you’re out there everywhere I wanna be
And I’m in here my dear my sweet my everything
Kiss my wrist and say goodnight
Congratulations are in order you were right
Step back

Holding on is losing grip at seventy miles an hour
The wind in my face the look on your face
As we start to bathe
In a nine millimeter shower

Six bullets for the week
Six shots we have to take
Six ways to behave
Six days from Sunday

And you’re out there everywhere I wanna be
And I’m in here my dear my sweet my everything
Kiss my wrist and say goodnight
Congratulations are in order you were right
Step back

We can dance together
Always and forever
Cuz you’re part of me
In this steel symphony
Step back
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The Last Great Loss of the Week

Contributed by paper-heart-hero on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:13:48 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

You’re my favorite disaster
The scent of your hair, the clothes that you wear
Keep me intoxicated and dreaming

You’re a walking suicide
These razor blades, have seen better days
Of butterfly kisses and screaming

And you’re out there everywhere I wanna be
And I’m in here my dear my sweet my everything
Kiss my wrist and say goodnight
Congratulations are in order you were right
Step back

Holding on is losing grip at seventy miles an hour
The wind in my face the look on your face
As we start to bathe
In a nine millimeter shower

Six bullets for the week
Six shots we have to take
Six ways to behave
Six days from Sunday

And you’re out there everywhere I wanna be
And I’m in here my dear my sweet my everything
Kiss my wrist and say goodnight
Congratulations are in order you were right
Step back

We can dance together
Always and forever
Cuz you’re part of me
In this steel symphony
Step back

Copyright Â© paper-heart-hero ... [ 2004-06-21 00:13:48]
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Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:31:35 AM AEST
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Great write, James. This was really origional and really beautiful. :)

Lindsey

Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week (User Rating: 1 )
by Dead_Next_Tuesday on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:40:52 AM AEST
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Very nicely written. This flows wonderfully.

Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:08:36 AM AEST
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I'm intrigued by your fatalistic gun-related imagery. Its something i've not seen before, apart from in your own previous works, of course.

It makes me wonder who inspires your stuff.

Anyway - another fine song.

Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:30:45 AM AEST
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Just the sort of thing i like
Very good

BS x

Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:27:32 AM AEST
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this was really good. much love and respect.
can't wait to read more.

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