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Array ( [sid] => 52943 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => walking the shore [time] => 2004-06-20 23:47:15 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote to my girl on our 2nd anniversary.....she didn't like it [bodytext] => The day we met
I remember it so vivedly
I bumped into you at the mall
You asked me to walk with you
After that day you told me you'd call

I waited for a month
Finaly the day came
When my phone rang
I almost forgot about that day
As soon as i heard your voice
I remembered everything

Here we are two years later
I walk you along this beach
My arm accross your back
Everything feels right

I take you to the spot and we lay there holding eachother the whole night
When the sun came up
It made your skin shine
You were brighter then the sun
Your smile lights up my world

I hope we are still together in another two years
I will love you for the rest of time
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walking the shore

Contributed by rugby_player on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:47:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The day we met
I remember it so vivedly
I bumped into you at the mall
You asked me to walk with you
After that day you told me you'd call

I waited for a month
Finaly the day came
When my phone rang
I almost forgot about that day
As soon as i heard your voice
I remembered everything

Here we are two years later
I walk you along this beach
My arm accross your back
Everything feels right

I take you to the spot and we lay there holding eachother the whole night
When the sun came up
It made your skin shine
You were brighter then the sun
Your smile lights up my world

I hope we are still together in another two years
I will love you for the rest of time

Copyright © rugby_player ... [ 2004-06-20 23:47:15]
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Re: walking the shore (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:52:38 PM AEST
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well, i think its sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: walking the shore (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:57:36 PM AEST
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Now that's mucho better than the bullett.
Very good, I give u a five star.
Good wwork.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
U really did make my day with your msn profile. Still smiling.

Re: walking the shore (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:27:50 AM AEST
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Nicely done! very sweet poem. I wish you the best of luck. A++++ I hope they've read this

Re: walking the shore (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:03:28 AM AEST
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very very very beautiful write I very much enjoyed it...much better then your later depressing writes...this one had a lot of feeling and lots of emotion I enjoyed it it screams truth keep it up...
much love,
Dani

Re: walking the shore (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:34:30 PM AEST
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Who could not love the romantic flare of this magical piece. As a lover of the ocean and the belief that there is someone for everyone, this is just the ticket. June

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