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Array ( [sid] => 52932 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Chosen [time] => 2004-06-20 22:45:24 [hometext] => I'll be honest, it's not completely original, I took parts from my girlfriend and I's love songs and fused them togther hopefully into a poem that makes some sense. So, please let me know if it does. [bodytext] => Chosen


I stare for a while the world around us disappears
Let me surround you, let me be the calm you seek
And the nights too long and cold here without you
For I cannot find the words to say I need you so

All the miles that separate, disappear now when I’m dreaming of your face
I’d give anything just to hear your voice
What if I did something, never to be undone
And for the first time, I didn’t feel alone

Everything I know and anywhere I go, it gets hard but it won’t take away my love
Every time I look at you, I don’t know where I’d be without you here with me
What would it take for me to be with you; with me you’re the chosen one
You will wait for me, I won’t be too late

I was tired of hurting, so tired of searching, until you walked into my life
When my world goes crazy, you’re right there to save me
And I still tremble when we touch, oh the look in your eyes, when we make love
There could never be another, to make me feel the way you do

And when the last one falls, when it’s all said and done
Life with you makes perfect sense
I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time
Because tonight girl, there’s only YOU and ME
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => KSUHO11 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Chosen

Contributed by KSUHO11 on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Chosen


I stare for a while the world around us disappears
Let me surround you, let me be the calm you seek
And the nights too long and cold here without you
For I cannot find the words to say I need you so

All the miles that separate, disappear now when I’m dreaming of your face
I’d give anything just to hear your voice
What if I did something, never to be undone
And for the first time, I didn’t feel alone

Everything I know and anywhere I go, it gets hard but it won’t take away my love
Every time I look at you, I don’t know where I’d be without you here with me
What would it take for me to be with you; with me you’re the chosen one
You will wait for me, I won’t be too late

I was tired of hurting, so tired of searching, until you walked into my life
When my world goes crazy, you’re right there to save me
And I still tremble when we touch, oh the look in your eyes, when we make love
There could never be another, to make me feel the way you do

And when the last one falls, when it’s all said and done
Life with you makes perfect sense
I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time
Because tonight girl, there’s only YOU and ME




Copyright © KSUHO11 ... [ 2004-06-20 22:45:24]
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Re: Chosen (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:33:22 PM AEST
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i love it. i really really liked it, and i can't wait until i have that with someone, so all i got to say really is you are lucky and don't take it for granted. i'm glad you have someone like that.

it totally makes sense how you wrote it.




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