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Array ( [sid] => 52920 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Please Hang On [time] => 2004-06-20 21:50:12 [hometext] => I originally wrote this for our very own member on this site rugby_player but it suites for all of you at YPDC if you are feeling the need for suicide or any relaps on anything...just hang on [bodytext] =>

In all the times it seems so hard,
When your tears cry out inside,
You must explore a new way to live,
And reverse your depression tide,

When all of your solutions,
When their problems seem too much,
Everyone has their joys
Very elusive and out of touch

Remember that this world is full of others
Just like you, And can reach
beyond this darkness
And change your point of view

But when it all seems very bleak,
And your hope has all but gone,
Remember, time will heal your heavy thoughts
If only you'll just hang on.

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Please Hang On

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

In all the times it seems so hard,
When your tears cry out inside,
You must explore a new way to live,
And reverse your depression tide,

When all of your solutions,
When their problems seem too much,
Everyone has their joys
Very elusive and out of touch

Remember that this world is full of others
Just like you, And can reach
beyond this darkness
And change your point of view

But when it all seems very bleak,
And your hope has all but gone,
Remember, time will heal your heavy thoughts
If only you'll just hang on.

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-20 21:50:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by Bones on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:55:22 PM AEST
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Hey Dani,
Cool poem! I loved it! Keep writing!
your friend/fellow poet,
Bones

Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:56:44 PM AEST
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First of all I want to thank you ever so much for commenting on my poems, I truly appreciate it, and I want to say how much I like this poem because I can relate to it, but anyways I look forward to your many poems.

Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:17:04 PM AEST
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Hey....I liked this. Thanks for writing me one.....great work..and what a surprise

Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:18:08 AM AEST
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What a beautiful dedication to rugby and everyone else in this situation on the site. Thank you for the wonderful poem. Great write.

Lindsey

Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:07:01 AM AEST
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its seems that some wounds even time cant heal.... amazing write thanks for you wonderful tribute. A++++

Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:53:40 AM AEST
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This is a very touching write.
It shows great compassion for anyone who goes thru these types of thought's.
Keep up the good writing 'cause there are many on our planet that jus get tired and need a lift just as this write.
God bless u.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:10:22 AM AEST
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this is a very positive write and a lovely dedication to everyone, thanks for sharing this

pixie xx

Re: Please Hang On (User Rating: 1 )
by babyboobooangel on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 07:10:24 PM AEST
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very nice write i have just recently discovered my inspiration the person who gives me the ability to write
i almost lost her and if i had read this poem im sure i would of felt alot better and as to do with sucide iv been there so this poem fits to me will i loved the write
keep more commin
pCe // the baby angel

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