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Array ( [sid] => 52897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thats it No More [time] => 2004-06-20 18:49:58 [hometext] => My anger is getting to me so much....i hate men....and i know this doesnt rhyem..i dont care really [bodytext] => You hit me and smacked me
Pushed me around
I can't take it anymore
Its your turn to be hurt
You ***** said you loved me
Yet your felt the need to leave your mark
Now i have a bruised arms
Its my turn to hit you
Like you hit me
Its my turn to kick you while your down
But this time i wont hold in everything
Im going to let it all out
My anger takes control of my fist
Im not sorry for hitting back
I was stabbed in the back
***** you no more
I wont just be ignored
My pain your pleasure
Lets see how that measures
When your laying in pain
See if you can understand
Im not your women to be played
I hope you learn its wrong
I wont take it anymore
And im not yours either
Its over....
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 6 [informant] => BloodyTears5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Thats it No More

Contributed by BloodyTears5 on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:49:58 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You hit me and smacked me
Pushed me around
I can't take it anymore
Its your turn to be hurt
You ***** said you loved me
Yet your felt the need to leave your mark
Now i have a bruised arms
Its my turn to hit you
Like you hit me
Its my turn to kick you while your down
But this time i wont hold in everything
Im going to let it all out
My anger takes control of my fist
Im not sorry for hitting back
I was stabbed in the back
***** you no more
I wont just be ignored
My pain your pleasure
Lets see how that measures
When your laying in pain
See if you can understand
Im not your women to be played
I hope you learn its wrong
I wont take it anymore
And im not yours either
Its over....

Copyright © BloodyTears5 ... [ 2004-06-20 18:49:58]
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Re: Thats it No More (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:57:47 PM AEST
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Good for you. U should pout him where he belongs, in jail.
I've only been hit once by a man but I leatned self protection so another one will never get a way with that again.
It's really sad but written well.
Hang in there and don't take any more **** from anyone.
luv, huggs, pryaers,
emy

Re: Thats it No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:54:37 PM AEST
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i felt the anger in this piece. its nice that you arent taking that from him/them anymore. i thought this was written well. rhymes arent essential to an excellent piece. =]

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