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Array ( [sid] => 52890 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Drown Myself In Sorrow [time] => 2004-06-20 17:45:05 [hometext] => I tried to commit suicide several times before, here's one experience. Notes wanted. [bodytext] => This isn't fair of me
I shouldnt put the ones I love through this kind of pain
It doesnt matter now, look what they did to me
The waters rushing out now
Too hot but it won't matter soon
The mirriors are already fogged
All the beter too
I hate to see the monster I've become
How did I get here ?
Where do I go ?
In to the tub, that's where
Why can't I even cry?
Look at what I'm doing, damn it
But you can't,
You never would
Goodbye to that too
All these memorries, who will they go to ?
so much matters, but so little counts
Well, this does
Could I be dead already ?
Maybe you should have listened when I begged
Or looked when I bled
It's come to this,
It's come to this,
It's come to this [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 36 [informant] => pyrofairyburning [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Drown Myself In Sorrow

Contributed by pyrofairyburning on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:45:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

This isn't fair of me
I shouldnt put the ones I love through this kind of pain
It doesnt matter now, look what they did to me
The waters rushing out now
Too hot but it won't matter soon
The mirriors are already fogged
All the beter too
I hate to see the monster I've become
How did I get here ?
Where do I go ?
In to the tub, that's where
Why can't I even cry?
Look at what I'm doing, damn it
But you can't,
You never would
Goodbye to that too
All these memorries, who will they go to ?
so much matters, but so little counts
Well, this does
Could I be dead already ?
Maybe you should have listened when I begged
Or looked when I bled
It's come to this,
It's come to this,
It's come to this

Copyright © pyrofairyburning ... [ 2004-06-20 17:45:05]
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Re: Drown Myself In Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:50:04 PM AEST
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wow very sad...I say keep your head held high your writing is far to good to waste your life...I love reading this...I too as you kwo have tried to commit suicide a few times but I'm realizing that there is so much more to life...and when I'm old enough to get out of here I will and I will be happy because its decisions I have made...please keep it up...
much love,
Dani

Re: Drown Myself In Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:22:34 AM AEST
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very well expressed ...... great write

pixie xx

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