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Array ( [sid] => 52868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hit Me [time] => 2004-06-20 14:41:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you may not abuse me with fists
but words seem to hurt more
a dagger stabbed through my heart
'i hate you'
doesnt seem much with fists thats how i would like it
it would feel better
but constant headaches
and voices streaming through my mind
blurs
colours
shapes
your face
i quiver
i grovel
this hurts more
this argument never stops
when did it start?
its ***** up like my life
i dont understand it anymore
whats the use of fighting back
your ALWAYS right anyway
i never have a say
im shut out
watching the same pattern
over and over and...
like a video
but no stop just carry on...
please
can i have a break
just a second
my mind
its dead
like me
PLEASE
LISTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just die or somehting
crawl into a corner
and fade away
then ill be happy
smile once more
wrinkled
like a new emotion
never been tested before
first time
baby
like my new life
hopefully
you wont appear

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Hit Me

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:41:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

you may not abuse me with fists
but words seem to hurt more
a dagger stabbed through my heart
'i hate you'
doesnt seem much with fists thats how i would like it
it would feel better
but constant headaches
and voices streaming through my mind
blurs
colours
shapes
your face
i quiver
i grovel
this hurts more
this argument never stops
when did it start?
its ***** up like my life
i dont understand it anymore
whats the use of fighting back
your ALWAYS right anyway
i never have a say
im shut out
watching the same pattern
over and over and...
like a video
but no stop just carry on...
please
can i have a break
just a second
my mind
its dead
like me
PLEASE
LISTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just die or somehting
crawl into a corner
and fade away
then ill be happy
smile once more
wrinkled
like a new emotion
never been tested before
first time
baby
like my new life
hopefully
you wont appear

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-06-20 14:41:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hit Me (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:08:07 PM AEST
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very strong and well put. I can relate with you fully here. I really enjoyed this. great piece. A++++

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