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Array ( [sid] => 52775 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => leve me alone, this is my act of shame [time] => 2004-06-19 20:54:38 [hometext] => This was what happened....but it didnt go quite like I thought it would...not like i planned it or anything...I was just fed up with everything... [bodytext] => Leave me alone
Im sharpening the knife
Ive made a decision
To take my own life

There's no turning back
No other way to go
Ive made up my mind
And I want you to know

Dont try to stop me
You will not succeed
I shall sit here in silence
And watch myself bleed

I wrote you a letter
Ive said my goodbyes
I just want to sleep
Close my tired eyes

Ive crossed the line
From sane to not
This side is better
But, better than what?

Ive never belonged here
Always in the way
Lost, sad & lonely
Never knowing what to say

I know that you love me
And I love you too
But I cannot stay here
Not just for you

Time for me to go
Now I must depart
My soul just died
And there goes my heart
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

leve me alone, this is my act of shame

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:54:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Leave me alone
Im sharpening the knife
Ive made a decision
To take my own life

There's no turning back
No other way to go
Ive made up my mind
And I want you to know

Dont try to stop me
You will not succeed
I shall sit here in silence
And watch myself bleed

I wrote you a letter
Ive said my goodbyes
I just want to sleep
Close my tired eyes

Ive crossed the line
From sane to not
This side is better
But, better than what?

Ive never belonged here
Always in the way
Lost, sad & lonely
Never knowing what to say

I know that you love me
And I love you too
But I cannot stay here
Not just for you

Time for me to go
Now I must depart
My soul just died
And there goes my heart

Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-19 20:54:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: leve me alone, this is my act of shame (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:06:08 PM AEST
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yeaa i know how you feel, i feel the same way..can never do anything right....i cant stay here much longer......but try to think on the bright side...hopefully you can over come it...i did..but it just keeps sinking back....
if you ever need to talk im always here..good luck in the long run..hope you begin to feel better...great poem by the way....

tweeky xx

Re: leve me alone, this is my act of shame (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:01:11 PM AEST
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Hey great job..You really do have talent..but i have told you that many times i'm sure it gets old. but anywho another great one keep em coming

Re: leve me alone, this is my act of shame (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:12:54 PM AEST
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nice nice nice!! I love this great work. you shouldnt be hard on yourself. you have an amazing talent. great write dear!! A+++++

Re: leve me alone, this is my act of shame (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:28:24 PM AEST
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We have a lot in common. This is a great poem. If you ever need anyone to talk to, please feel free to Im me, PM me, anything that will help. We all need friends and a shoulder to cry on. :) Thank you for sharing. Great write.

Lindsey

Re: leve me alone, this is my act of shame (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:30:15 AM AEST
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this hits home with me, you have written about it so well, please try and carry on you will be glad that you didn't end your life someday... I promise

pixie xx

Re: leve me alone, this is my act of shame (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:00:56 AM AEST
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I liked this. You put alot of depth into short sentences. Nice flow. Kudos!
Thumps ; 0 )

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