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As they sit back and wait for the end
Taking turns devouring each others hollow souls
Causing an earth shattering beginning, unable to mend.

Lost in a sea of broken egos
Given to the war-monger of our lost youth; blamed
Standing up for the wrong fight
Quietly accepting the mocks and stares; ashamed.

Leave the bodies piled and unwanted
They only disappear in the mind for the cause; forbidden
Save the last remaining childhood dream
Of an existance that has been abandoned; hidden.

Take the low road to stay camouflaged by the high
The only defense against all your weakness
Vividly disappointing view of life
And all they know now is all the bleakness. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 6 [informant] => xslashxprettyxskinx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

LiFe'S DiSaPPoiNTiNG CoLouRS

Contributed by xslashxprettyxskinx on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:47:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Cast the shadows of neglect on innocent bystanders
As they sit back and wait for the end
Taking turns devouring each others hollow souls
Causing an earth shattering beginning, unable to mend.

Lost in a sea of broken egos
Given to the war-monger of our lost youth; blamed
Standing up for the wrong fight
Quietly accepting the mocks and stares; ashamed.

Leave the bodies piled and unwanted
They only disappear in the mind for the cause; forbidden
Save the last remaining childhood dream
Of an existance that has been abandoned; hidden.

Take the low road to stay camouflaged by the high
The only defense against all your weakness
Vividly disappointing view of life
And all they know now is all the bleakness.

Copyright © xslashxprettyxskinx ... [ 2004-06-19 15:47:03]
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Re: LiFe'S DiSaPPoiNTiNG CoLouRS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:45:11 PM AEST
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I do sincerely hope things are looking a little better in your life today. Life can be ugly and rough, but there are also beautiful moments to carry us through those times.

Rita

Re: LiFe'S DiSaPPoiNTiNG CoLouRS (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:56:39 PM AEST
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You said i was talented, jeese! You are missy, very much so x

Re: LiFe'S DiSaPPoiNTiNG CoLouRS (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:34:34 PM AEST
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WELCOME TO YPDC.......YOU WILL LOVE IT HERE. We treat each other like family!
I know just how you feel, I've seen the very same thing all around me too!
I hope your bad day has disappeared.....life can be bad, sad, but then another day very glad! So brush the dust off you feet....and go on....forgetting that bad day.
Very good poem you wrote.....I especially liked the line that said,"Lost in a sea of broken egos!" How true for many love only themselves now days!
Thanking you so much for commenting on my poem Common Sense.........Welcome again!
lovingcritters
ConSue to you

Re: LiFe'S DiSaPPoiNTiNG CoLouRS (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:03:27 PM AEST
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beautifully done so emotional yes life at times can be the super drag but Rita had a good point there is the tiny little moments that can pull us through the worst of times(ask me I know) I hope that things take a brighter turn for you you deserve great happiness
Michelle

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