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Array ( [sid] => 52717 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Will You Help Me? [time] => 2004-06-19 11:53:38 [hometext] => Got an idea for this poem from a subject on the forums about assisted suicide& this is what I came up with...comments appreciated [bodytext] => Please help me to end this misery?
Will you enter into this conspiracy,
Help me leave this pain behind,
I need help to get out of this bind.

I need you to help me to die,
So never again will I have to cry,
And feel my disease inside grow,
I know that I really must go.

Please don’t watch me suffer anymore,
Help me to walk through heavens door,
I have gone on for as long as I possibly could,
If I had strength I’d carry on….. I would.

Please stay with me until I’ve gone,
Up into heaven where I truly belong,
I don’t want to die all alone,
In this place that I call home.

I know this is a lot to ask,
I can not go on it is too hard a task,
It takes all my strength to muster a breath,
I know that I will be much happier in death.

You have always been a great friend,
With advice to offer and a shoulder to lend,
Please do this and set me free,
All I ask is will you help me?

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Will You Help Me?

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:53:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Please help me to end this misery?
Will you enter into this conspiracy,
Help me leave this pain behind,
I need help to get out of this bind.

I need you to help me to die,
So never again will I have to cry,
And feel my disease inside grow,
I know that I really must go.

Please don’t watch me suffer anymore,
Help me to walk through heavens door,
I have gone on for as long as I possibly could,
If I had strength I’d carry on….. I would.

Please stay with me until I’ve gone,
Up into heaven where I truly belong,
I don’t want to die all alone,
In this place that I call home.

I know this is a lot to ask,
I can not go on it is too hard a task,
It takes all my strength to muster a breath,
I know that I will be much happier in death.

You have always been a great friend,
With advice to offer and a shoulder to lend,
Please do this and set me free,
All I ask is will you help me?

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-06-19 11:53:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:12:54 PM AEST
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Very creative on merciful killings.

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:13:24 PM AEST
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I could use a hand sometimes.... I find im to weak to go through with it most of the time.

A great poem very heart felt. I enjoyed this read alot. A++++

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:34:14 PM AEST
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I love this poem, it's um....hm....there's no words, and that's unusual becuase i alwayz have something to say...well it's a great poem, and i love the way your words flow, i love the way you write...

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:34:21 PM AEST
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Hey, This was sad, when it talked about how the person wanted someone to like help him kill himself. It was explained good, and detailed. great one.

-Amber

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:01:21 PM AEST
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I really really find this to be my story...what is to be a shame...I enjoyed it however...I have broken my mistakes and made them into something more...they made me stronger well keep it up...
much love,
Dani

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by lexxie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:17:13 PM AEST
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w0w this is really good very creative loved it

l3xxi3

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:58:49 PM AEST
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Very sad and I can relate. Sometimes it doesn't feel like you can go on and it'd be better to just give up. Very nice write I loved it.
~Kris~

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:56:37 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
This would be hard no matter which way a person went.
huggs,
emy

Re: Will You Help Me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:27:21 AM AEST
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