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in a vessel spun of thought
half a word from drowning
poets doze and dream

others plough the sea with
engines of fire and steel
fearing the wisdom of
the mumbling waters.

the silent sea mumbles
of majesty and maddness
singing lusty chanties
of loss and of love

unheard in the passage
of steel and the clamor fire
which muffle those aboard
from the madness of the sea...

the vessels of steel and fire
slip broken beneath the waves
their pride and purpose
lost amongst the mumbles

while dozing dreaming poets
glean glimpses of sanity
half a word from drowning
adrift on the mumbling sea

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while poets doze and dream

Contributed by aernby on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:42:35 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

adrift on a sea of mumbles
in a vessel spun of thought
half a word from drowning
poets doze and dream

others plough the sea with
engines of fire and steel
fearing the wisdom of
the mumbling waters.

the silent sea mumbles
of majesty and maddness
singing lusty chanties
of loss and of love

unheard in the passage
of steel and the clamor fire
which muffle those aboard
from the madness of the sea...

the vessels of steel and fire
slip broken beneath the waves
their pride and purpose
lost amongst the mumbles

while dozing dreaming poets
glean glimpses of sanity
half a word from drowning
adrift on the mumbling sea

Copyright © aernby ... [ 2004-06-19 11:42:35]
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Re: while poets doze and dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:14:12 PM AEST
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Pleasing and full-bodied.
I like the smothering and watery nature of this work.
Good write.

Re: while poets doze and dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:26:23 PM AEST
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I'm not exactly sure what you are saying here. I don't want to guess.

Re: while poets doze and dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:36:11 PM AEST
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Nice imagery, John.....
Jenni

Re: while poets doze and dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:29:51 PM AEST
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very well written. great write.

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