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Array ( [sid] => 52706 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Want To Get My Lip Pierced!... [time] => 2004-06-19 09:55:24 [hometext] => I want to ge my lip pierced!is that a crime??my family says that they're ugly,my mum and dad have said no!and my nan has threatened not look at me if i get it done,and all the while my 19 year old sister is walking round with 3 lip piercings!its not FAIR! [bodytext] => I want to get my lip pierced,
Why is that so bad?
Please let me get my lip pierced!
Mum, are you listening???
Dad?

Mum, I want to get my lip pierced!
Please give consent.
Why are you giving me those looks?
Its not like it’ll be misspent.

I want to get my lip pierced,
Because I like that look.
I’ll pay for it out of my money,
Just give your consent and book!

Why should it change me?
It’s just a stud or ring?
It’s like when people diss my clothes!
It won’t rule my personality!!!

So now you’re saying that I have to be 36.
Before I can get in done,
That rip the p***.
Please say “yes”, mum!

This isn’t funny!
Don’t treat me like a kid.
I don’t care if it’s not in fashion!
I don’t give a *****!!!!

I want one done,
Not because I want to look hard.
It’s because I like that look,
Are you saying you were never young once?

Nan, don’t look at me like that.
What’s it got to do with you?
Oh, so you won’t look at me if it’s done!
Well, you’ll have to get used to it won’t you!

Mum, I want to get my lip pierced.
Don’t think I’ll let this go,
Dad, it’s just your signature!
Oh! Why are you saying no???

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I Want To Get My Lip Pierced!...

Contributed by deathdrop on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:55:24 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I want to get my lip pierced,
Why is that so bad?
Please let me get my lip pierced!
Mum, are you listening???
Dad?

Mum, I want to get my lip pierced!
Please give consent.
Why are you giving me those looks?
Its not like it’ll be misspent.

I want to get my lip pierced,
Because I like that look.
I’ll pay for it out of my money,
Just give your consent and book!

Why should it change me?
It’s just a stud or ring?
It’s like when people diss my clothes!
It won’t rule my personality!!!

So now you’re saying that I have to be 36.
Before I can get in done,
That rip the p***.
Please say “yes”, mum!

This isn’t funny!
Don’t treat me like a kid.
I don’t care if it’s not in fashion!
I don’t give a *****!!!!

I want one done,
Not because I want to look hard.
It’s because I like that look,
Are you saying you were never young once?

Nan, don’t look at me like that.
What’s it got to do with you?
Oh, so you won’t look at me if it’s done!
Well, you’ll have to get used to it won’t you!

Mum, I want to get my lip pierced.
Don’t think I’ll let this go,
Dad, it’s just your signature!
Oh! Why are you saying no???





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Re: I Want To Get My Lip Pierced!... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:36:57 AM AEST
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I can't help you on this one, except to say don't be so quick to change your natural bueaty it will speak volumes of you in the future


Re: I Want To Get My Lip Pierced!... (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:05:09 AM AEST
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I believe strongly in all to have the opportunity to have body modications. because its art in a primal beautiful expressionate form. That and my parents wont let me have any tatto's or piercings till I'm 18 (a few months). I think there just concenerend, because body art isnt just for christmas, its for ever and always leaves a scar. I wanna get me lip pierced and eyebrow pierced. And get tatoo's which make people laugh. Might get a self potrait on my back, so people can see my face without seeing my face. (just like steve-o....eh)


Re: I Want To Get My Lip Pierced!... (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:45:22 AM AEST
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I Like This. I Am Sorry You Can't Get It Done. If You Can't Wait Intill You're 18


Re: I Want To Get My Lip Pierced!... (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:22:55 PM AEST
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wow a very clear poem, and a good way to get your point across..
I've been wanting a lip ring myself for a few years, I just like how they look, I dont want "the look".. it's not like I'll be changing myself, just adding a percing.... But for me I understadn why i can't, it's cuz of allergies... I HAD my naval peirced, but the infection got too big (allergic to cheap metals), so I had to take it out, and now I have a scar where it was, but I'm trying again this summer, but on the bottom...
Well I hope that you eventually get your lip peirced... peircings are a way to express yourself

keep up the good work

*~Alicia~*


Re: I Want To Get My Lip Pierced!... (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymous1212 on Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 03:32:05 PM AEST
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haha i like this...sorry about your parents not agreeing with you....i like all the passion in this poem...keep up the good work




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