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Array ( [sid] => 52680 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Murder Hate [time] => 2004-06-19 02:14:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Murder Hate
June 19, 2004

I am beyond believing,
That you'll one day stop deceiving.
My sights are set to new,
Thoughts of anger for you.
No longer am I bitter,
Jealous, hurt, or scared.
I've long since stopped thinking,
About the moments we shared,
And thinking you had cared.
And now,
Now I am prepared.

This night,
I fight,
For my,
Life.

You took a piece of me away with you,
A piece I call the truth.
And you have made it hard,
For me to see the real men in the world for me.
I can't accept that you were victorious,
I won't acknowledge what you did.
But I know when I leave this room tonight,
I'll have finally won the fight.
Like this steel I reveal the plan I possess,
And watch your reflection shiver in the blade.
What a nice couple we could have made...

This night,
I fight,
For my,
Life.

Anything I ever felt for you was a lie,
Those I tried and tried to hide.
But you can never lie to me again.
Goodbye.
You will never see the night again.
Goodbye.
For you now, I have only one...
One last thing to let you feel.
Look into my eyes and see what is real.
Cool and calculated I will take your life,
Watch the sights in your eyes evaporate,
And little boy I thought I knew,
Now you know the meaning of murder hate.
Too late.

This night,
I fight,
For my,
Life. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Calista [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Murder Hate

Contributed by Calista on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:14:46 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Murder Hate
June 19, 2004

I am beyond believing,
That you'll one day stop deceiving.
My sights are set to new,
Thoughts of anger for you.
No longer am I bitter,
Jealous, hurt, or scared.
I've long since stopped thinking,
About the moments we shared,
And thinking you had cared.
And now,
Now I am prepared.

This night,
I fight,
For my,
Life.

You took a piece of me away with you,
A piece I call the truth.
And you have made it hard,
For me to see the real men in the world for me.
I can't accept that you were victorious,
I won't acknowledge what you did.
But I know when I leave this room tonight,
I'll have finally won the fight.
Like this steel I reveal the plan I possess,
And watch your reflection shiver in the blade.
What a nice couple we could have made...

This night,
I fight,
For my,
Life.

Anything I ever felt for you was a lie,
Those I tried and tried to hide.
But you can never lie to me again.
Goodbye.
You will never see the night again.
Goodbye.
For you now, I have only one...
One last thing to let you feel.
Look into my eyes and see what is real.
Cool and calculated I will take your life,
Watch the sights in your eyes evaporate,
And little boy I thought I knew,
Now you know the meaning of murder hate.
Too late.

This night,
I fight,
For my,
Life.




Copyright © Calista ... [ 2004-06-19 02:14:46]
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Re: Murder Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:20:08 AM AEST
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hell hath no fury like a lover scorned. excellent write very dark,intense and angry. keep writing
~vermillion~


Re: Murder Hate (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:05:55 PM AEST
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great piece.. my ex ***** me over too.. revenge is a *****.. and just like you i will get the last laugh.. AMI JO




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