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Array ( [sid] => 52645 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye, I love you [time] => 2004-06-18 21:32:14 [hometext] => I wrote this a couple months ago when my Uncle died. [bodytext] => Today is the day we put you to rest,
We all so Goodbe to the one who was best.

The one who made us laugh,
and never made us cry.
So why did God choose you to die?

You we the sunshine,
when the sky was gray.
And you were the horizon,
when the night turned to day.

Not only were you family,
you were also my friend.
We'll always be together,
together til the end.

But until we meet again in Heaven,
in the clouds is were you'll be.
So you can watch over and protect us,
for all of eternity [comments] => 3 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 52 [informant] => nickibabe421 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Goodbye, I love you

Contributed by nickibabe421 on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:32:14 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Today is the day we put you to rest,
We all so Goodbe to the one who was best.

The one who made us laugh,
and never made us cry.
So why did God choose you to die?

You we the sunshine,
when the sky was gray.
And you were the horizon,
when the night turned to day.

Not only were you family,
you were also my friend.
We'll always be together,
together til the end.

But until we meet again in Heaven,
in the clouds is were you'll be.
So you can watch over and protect us,
for all of eternity




Copyright © nickibabe421 ... [ 2004-06-18 21:32:14]
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Re: Goodbye, I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by RonMiller on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:59:02 PM AEST
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A very nice tribute to your uncle..
I'm sorry for your loss..
This is a great poem..

Ron


Re: Goodbye, I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:46:26 PM AEST
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Loving tribute to someone you loved. It is always hard to lose them. But one day you will be together again. He will be with you until that time, watching over you.

Rita


Re: Goodbye, I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:23:29 PM AEST
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this is very sad and emotional... i wrote a simular poem the other day about my uncle....

great write

pixie xx




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