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Array ( [sid] => 52623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is Suicide Really an Answer? [time] => 2004-06-18 19:36:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Have you ever wonder why the hell were you born,
You keep thinking and never come up with an answer,
Always wonder of way to escape the pain.

So you turn to the bottle, but that's not good enough
So you turn to drugs.
You're happy until they're all gone

When the drugs have fried your brain
You're wondering why the hell did you ever start.

At your lowest wondering if suicide is the answer,
Looking for pills in the medicine cabinet.
You take them, but you awake the next day

Wondering why the hell your still living
Then you cut your wrist
Watching the blood start to go down your pale arm
You get up attempting to walk to your room

You fall right out side of your room
As you start to slip into a coma
Because of all the blood you lost
Waiting to die

You start to wonder why
Why did I think my life was so horrible?
I have hurt all the people in my life
What a selfish thing I have done

If I could make a wish,
I wish I could erase all the pain I just cause

No suicide is not an answer
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Is Suicide Really an Answer?

Contributed by apcfan on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:36:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Have you ever wonder why the hell were you born,
You keep thinking and never come up with an answer,
Always wonder of way to escape the pain.

So you turn to the bottle, but that's not good enough
So you turn to drugs.
You're happy until they're all gone

When the drugs have fried your brain
You're wondering why the hell did you ever start.

At your lowest wondering if suicide is the answer,
Looking for pills in the medicine cabinet.
You take them, but you awake the next day

Wondering why the hell your still living
Then you cut your wrist
Watching the blood start to go down your pale arm
You get up attempting to walk to your room

You fall right out side of your room
As you start to slip into a coma
Because of all the blood you lost
Waiting to die

You start to wonder why
Why did I think my life was so horrible?
I have hurt all the people in my life
What a selfish thing I have done

If I could make a wish,
I wish I could erase all the pain I just cause

No suicide is not an answer




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Re: Is Suicide Really an Answer? (User Rating: 1 )
by Cole on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:04:39 PM AEST
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It was good, and then I read the last line. I'd take it out if I were you, but then again, I'm not you. It's your choice.


Re: Is Suicide Really an Answer? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:23:07 PM AEST
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this was rather simplistic I thought don't get me wrong I liked it just thought it was written rather simply, but its odd since i've turned to drugs, alcohol, and cutting and found no relief. So I find it interesting that you touched on those three. Also, suicide is an answer just not a good one and unlike other 'answers' suicide cannot be erased.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Is Suicide Really an Answer? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:26:51 AM AEST
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great message here, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Is Suicide Really an Answer? (User Rating: 1 )
by teagy03 on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:04:20 PM AEST
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I agree with bob the clown, but take out the last line...

Otherwise, a simple yet flowing poem.

Good




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