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Array ( [sid] => 52607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Honest love [time] => 2004-06-18 16:47:59 [hometext] => This one I wrote for this girl, Steph, because I made mistakes in the past... I'm sure you know how that goes. [bodytext] => If I could
I would go back in time
To the day I first say you
And say 'hi'
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day long before
When you asked me
To be your pretend boyfriend
Why pretend?
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day I thought
I gathered enough courage
To ask you out
If I could
I would go back in time
To the day we first kissed
And kiss you longer
If I could
I would go back in time
To get you
Before anyone else
If I could
I would do these things
With all the honest love
That makes me
And I would not second-think
my choice to be with you
Over anyone else
And the mistakes I've made
I will take to my grave
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day long ago
And honestly say
I love you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 43 [informant] => TheLastStringCut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Honest love

Contributed by TheLastStringCut on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

If I could
I would go back in time
To the day I first say you
And say 'hi'
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day long before
When you asked me
To be your pretend boyfriend
Why pretend?
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day I thought
I gathered enough courage
To ask you out
If I could
I would go back in time
To the day we first kissed
And kiss you longer
If I could
I would go back in time
To get you
Before anyone else
If I could
I would do these things
With all the honest love
That makes me
And I would not second-think
my choice to be with you
Over anyone else
And the mistakes I've made
I will take to my grave
If I could
I would go back in time
To a day long ago
And honestly say
I love you

Copyright © TheLastStringCut ... [ 2004-06-18 16:47:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Honest love (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:05:20 PM AEST
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Hey Dude. What's Up? Nothing Much Down Here. I Just Wanted To Say Hello And How's Life Treating You? Mine's All right. I Could Say This Is Pretty Okay

Re: Honest love (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:22:32 PM AEST
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This was a very well written poem, and what you wanted to say was conveyed to perfection. Well done

Re: Honest love (User Rating: 1 )
by pyrofairyburning on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:17:51 PM AEST
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Touching. I do honestly say. lol. Hmmm, good write. I enjoyed. 8 rom ten, maybe.

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