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Array ( [sid] => 52606 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Can I Move On? [time] => 2004-06-18 16:42:02 [hometext] => I wrote this awhile ago when I was dumped by my ex (duh) and she kept asking me if I had found someone new yet. I couldn't really think of how to finish it, so I threw this ending together, please don't ridicule me. ^_^ [bodytext] => A phantom of your imagination
Passed in through your fortifications
Into your world of rest and slumber
Where you deign to believe

A woman lost but not long forgotten
Who left and you hit rock bottom
When once you danced upon her lips
Where you sought reprieve

You dream in a world of second chances
Of forgotten or lost loves, of romances
Her curves and dips, lips upon lips
And oh, the fog of that fateful eve'

She's alight with a new
Someone who's not you
So you wish to stay in your world of slumber
Though I wish it too, for I am you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => TheLastStringCut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
How Can I Move On?

Contributed by TheLastStringCut on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:42:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



A phantom of your imagination
Passed in through your fortifications
Into your world of rest and slumber
Where you deign to believe

A woman lost but not long forgotten
Who left and you hit rock bottom
When once you danced upon her lips
Where you sought reprieve

You dream in a world of second chances
Of forgotten or lost loves, of romances
Her curves and dips, lips upon lips
And oh, the fog of that fateful eve'

She's alight with a new
Someone who's not you
So you wish to stay in your world of slumber
Though I wish it too, for I am you




Copyright © TheLastStringCut ... [ 2004-06-18 16:42:02]
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Re: How Can I Move On? (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:51:23 PM AEST
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you can move on by being with me :D RAWR i love you jeff!! *hugs u and kisses your cheek* AMI JO




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