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Array ( [sid] => 52600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As one [time] => 2004-06-18 15:32:58 [hometext] => This poem is dedicated to my boyfriend, and I wan't him to know that I will always love and care for him [bodytext] => Set me free,
So my soul can connect,
And my heart can mend,
Back into place,
So I won't shed a tear,
Be here for me,
When my nights are cold,
And I'm all alone,
Touch me in a way,
That will comfort me,
And make me feel warm inside,
Tell me what you need,
Because I will be here for you,
When I'm crying at night,
I need you to wipe the tears away,
Free my inner self,
So I can love you more,
And we can connect as one,
Love me for me,
So I can feel better,
On the inside,
Guide me to you,
Before things slip away,
When you see that star,
In the sky,
Just think about me,
For that is a sign,
Telling how much I love you,
Tell me,
How u really feel,
On the inside and out,
Your love has some power over me,
And I'm never letting you go,
Please know that I care,
And I love you,
With all of my heart and soul,
Your words touch my heart,
Making me feel special,
So if you really care,
Let me show you,
How much I care for you,
With you I am complete,
And with you I'm protected,
Show me that love is the key,
To our destiny,
Together we can love each other,
And help one another,
You have opened up my heart,
So your love could come in,
Just hold me tight,
So I will know you will,
Always be here for me,
I would show you how much,
I need you in my life,
All I need you to do,
Is to love me,
With all your heart,
And all of your soul,
For I know we are together,
As one [comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

As one

Contributed by Luckycharm on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Set me free,
So my soul can connect,
And my heart can mend,
Back into place,
So I won't shed a tear,
Be here for me,
When my nights are cold,
And I'm all alone,
Touch me in a way,
That will comfort me,
And make me feel warm inside,
Tell me what you need,
Because I will be here for you,
When I'm crying at night,
I need you to wipe the tears away,
Free my inner self,
So I can love you more,
And we can connect as one,
Love me for me,
So I can feel better,
On the inside,
Guide me to you,
Before things slip away,
When you see that star,
In the sky,
Just think about me,
For that is a sign,
Telling how much I love you,
Tell me,
How u really feel,
On the inside and out,
Your love has some power over me,
And I'm never letting you go,
Please know that I care,
And I love you,
With all of my heart and soul,
Your words touch my heart,
Making me feel special,
So if you really care,
Let me show you,
How much I care for you,
With you I am complete,
And with you I'm protected,
Show me that love is the key,
To our destiny,
Together we can love each other,
And help one another,
You have opened up my heart,
So your love could come in,
Just hold me tight,
So I will know you will,
Always be here for me,
I would show you how much,
I need you in my life,
All I need you to do,
Is to love me,
With all your heart,
And all of your soul,
For I know we are together,
As one

Copyright © Luckycharm ... [ 2004-06-18 15:32:58]
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Re: As one (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:00:40 PM AEST
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Here is a quote from my favorite artist to show how your words have inspired me.

"With you
although I'm poor I feel like a king
With you
though I have nothing I feel I have everything
for with out you the world would soon fade away
I'd be here crying day after day
promise me you'll never go away"

Quote from the song "With You" by Sam Cooke

Re: As one (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 07:48:32 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: As one (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:32:14 AM AEST
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Beautiful words, such display of enlightend emotion. Good job girlie. Take care and God bless you. I glad to see you happy.

Re: As one (User Rating: 1 )
by PunkRocker494 on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:22:55 PM AEST
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That was very inspiring girl! It makes me wish I had someone like that. Good job and keep your spirit high.

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