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Array ( [sid] => 52595 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Listen.....Poslouchej.... [time] => 2004-06-18 15:11:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Listen, can you hear?
Echo sounds here
It´s you again walking
To your land secret

Long stairs down
You always walked
On one of each stair
Candle you found

Listen, now can you hear?
Echo sounds here
Your heart´s loud beat
And your knees shivering

You lightened candle
Put it on your parth
They illumined the way
To your paradise

Strain your ears, can you hear?
No, as your eyes deceive you
The candles are going out
And strangles you fear

No, you can´t hear,
Burtn ones you count down
While another ones
Lighten up your new path

No, this stream of tears
Will douse the blaze
Your paradise comes to end
And darkness will govern again

Don´t read their shape
Don´t measure brightness
Don´t trust the wind
Don´t look for fairness

By wax trickled down
In your paradise
Once for ever written
Will be all memoirs

Poslouchej, slyšíš?
Ozvěna se rozléhá,
To jak znovu kráčíš
Do svého tajemna

Dlouhé schodiště dolů
Po kterém kráčelas
Vždy na jednom ze schodů
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Listen.....Poslouchej....

Contributed by Aika on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Listen, can you hear?
Echo sounds here
It´s you again walking
To your land secret

Long stairs down
You always walked
On one of each stair
Candle you found

Listen, now can you hear?
Echo sounds here
Your heart´s loud beat
And your knees shivering

You lightened candle
Put it on your parth
They illumined the way
To your paradise

Strain your ears, can you hear?
No, as your eyes deceive you
The candles are going out
And strangles you fear

No, you can´t hear,
Burtn ones you count down
While another ones
Lighten up your new path

No, this stream of tears
Will douse the blaze
Your paradise comes to end
And darkness will govern again

Don´t read their shape
Don´t measure brightness
Don´t trust the wind
Don´t look for fairness

By wax trickled down
In your paradise
Once for ever written
Will be all memoirs

Poslouchej, slyšíš?
Ozvěna se rozléhá,
To jak znovu kráčíš
Do svého tajemna

Dlouhé schodiště dolů
Po kterém kráčelas
Vždy na jednom ze schodů
Svíčku nalezlas

Slyš, tak už slyšíš?
Ozvěna se rozléhá,
Jak tvé srdce buší
A třesou se ti kolena

Zapálilas svíčku
Na cestu postavila
Ony ozářily cestičku
S každou blíže jsi ráji byla

Napni sluch, slyšíš?
Ne, protože mámí tě zrak
Svíčky dohasínají
A tebe dusí strach

Bývalas šťastná
A úsměvem jiskrným
Očima jasnýma
Rozdávala ses svícím

Ne, neslyšíš, nemůžeš
Protože počítáš zhasínající
Na cestičku jinou teď
Ty zbylé ti svítí

Ne, ten potok slzí
Uhasí jejich zář
Tvé tajemno udusí
Zavládne temnota zas

Nečti v jejich tvaru,
Neměř světlost
Nevěř větru
Nehledej spravedlnost

Z vosku skapaného
Ti jednou pro vždy
V tvém ráji zapsané
Zůstanou vzpomínky

Copyright Â© Aika ... [ 2004-06-18 15:11:08]
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Re: Listen.....Poslouchej.... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:14:01 PM AEST
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Very different but written well.
huggs,
emy

Re: Listen.....Poslouchej.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:53:30 AM AEST
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Once again Aika, you have produced a poem that enchants from start to finish.
A lost soul searching for the answers in this one I think.

steve
x

Re: Listen.....Poslouchej.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Falloftheangels on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 04:57:33 PM AEST
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Wow. That was really-- this is going to sound lame but whatever- beautiful! You have real talent keep writing.

Fall of the Angels

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